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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 28, 2008 20:17:40 GMT -5
Huh... This is different. So the little demon is... Tony but not? Now I'm really wondering what you're up to. XP
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Post by tabiris on Jul 28, 2008 20:18:13 GMT -5
to clarify this tony doesn't have the accent but still has the lisp.
also the little demon isn't tony XP
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Post by NightWing on Jul 28, 2008 23:13:33 GMT -5
... What the heck? Is this like a Tony from the future, or an alternate reality, or... *brain pops*
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Post by tabiris on Jul 29, 2008 13:55:57 GMT -5
yay he's popping! XP
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Post by tabiris on Jul 29, 2008 17:23:57 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 8.1: Into the Dragons Lair[/glow]
It’s been three days since Tony found Zeno. Zeno managed to get Tony about to normal health and they shared their stories with each other. Every detail nitpicked carefully and conveyed down to the very wording of Fear and Sorrow, who helped with some of the minor details.
“So we’re following the instruction of two voices we barely understand to find the end of this rather strange adventure.” Zeno and Tony were making their way down the mountain. They had a lovely view of the forest and could see the ash field from where they were; there was something shiny at the edge of the ash field but they couldn’t tell what it was.
-The Commandants Temporary Headquarters. Electric Castle 00000110. Not a funny place really. Everything is shiny smooth and dull.-
“Indeeds but dis is nots too wierds in der grands scheme.” Tony followed behind Zeno so that Zeno could catch him if he fell.
-It’s a trap you know. The Commandant ordered us to bring you to him and forbade us tell many things. This doesn’t bode well. I foresee death and sorrow.-
The conversation cycled like this for hours. The conversations came to an abrupt halt when they reached the ash fields. All the ash had been swept away and in their place was a sleek metal pathway leading to an oversized door.
-We’re here. A most frightening appearance it makes despite the sleek metal.-
-It’s sad to see the destruction of the area just to bend space and reverse the stream. But does it really influence time?-
“Well Tony here we are.” Zeno pulled out his scythe.
“Indeeds. It is times for dis to ends.” Tony adjusted his hat.
The doors opened with a metal grating noise that indicated it was a long time since the doors had been oiled. The brave-ish adventurers entered the lobby in awe of the high arch ceilings with a touch of gothic architecture.
The doors slammed behind Tony and Zeno and an intercom crackled to life high above. “Welcome gentlemens. It’s goods for you to comes. I’ve been waitings for a while. I was startings to think you weren’t going to find your way heres.”
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Post by NightWing on Jul 29, 2008 18:21:35 GMT -5
What will become of them now...
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 29, 2008 18:28:09 GMT -5
Well this should be interesting. O.o
^^
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2008 13:23:16 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 8.2:[/glow]
“Well this doesn’t bode well.” Zeno clutched his scythe close.
“Nein. It does nots bode wells.” Tony took his large wolf form.
-It’s much worse than you seem to think.- Fear appeared in front of Zeno. “Far worse.”
Sorrow soon followed suit in front of Tony. “It’s about time you learned where you are. But I can’t tell you.”
“Ladies woulds you be so kinds as to be quiets? Actually I thinks I bests that you are solids again.” The intercom crackled and faded slowly. There was a loud bang and Fear and Sorrow were sent flying into opposite walls from each other. Despite the forms they usually chose they were quite well dressed in similar uniforms to that of the dream selves that Zeno and Tony dreamed wore; the main difference being they had little bars on the shoulder of their outfits instead of stars. Sorrow’s outfit was black and Fear’s was red. Sorrow had a black hair in a braid and fear short red hair that covered her face. Both girls seemed especially frail and thin.
“Mein Gott!” Tony and Zeno were left standing there speechless. Both girls were visible to all parties present (wow all off two people -eyeroll-). The two girls got up and looked at themselves for a minute then at Tony and Zeno then to each other. In a flash weapons were drawn and aimed, each girl aiming at the other. Slowly they lowered their weapons laughing and then raised them at each other again.
“Nows ladies lets us not fights between ourselves.” Tony raised his hands at the two slowly.
“Tony, with all due respect 2nd Lieutenant Fear here is completely devoted to the Commandant. She needs to be erased from the world.” Sorrow pulled back the hammer on her gun; its frame was based of the Thor .45-70 hand rifle (it’s a pistol that has a really really long range.) only a little more refined.
“Liar! It’s you that’s devoted to the Commandant, 1st Leutenant Sorrow!” Her firearm was more like a PSS Russian handgun; a simple lightweight weapon still used to this day with suppression built into the weapons rounds.
“How about we all put our weapons away and continue down the already only way to continue.” Zeno pointed to a corridor that was the oly way out of the lobby.
The intercom cackled to life again. “Ladies, ladies, we have guests and your beings rudes. Now puts the toys aways. You’re both goings to die heres anyways. Why not lives a little longers?”
Fear looked from the intercom to Sorrow. “#@$@ this!” There was a soft click as Fear pulled the trigger on her PSS. Sorrow pulled the trigger on her own gun with similar results.
“Oh dids I forgets to gives you girls ammos? Sillys me.” A cruel laugh filled the lobby fadeing as the intercom died once again.
“Well dat were disturbings. Well Zeno lets goes and lets de girls decides what dey gonna does.” Tony and Zeno made their way down the passage. Fear and Sorrow stared each other down for a moment before finally following Tony and Zeno.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2008 13:24:52 GMT -5
now hopefully this will keep you all distracted while i make some avies. i have most of the next chappy on paper already too.
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 30, 2008 13:28:51 GMT -5
Huh... Wow. Interesting.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2008 13:34:40 GMT -5
indeeds XP
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Post by NightWing on Jul 30, 2008 15:52:45 GMT -5
Very interesting indeed...
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2008 16:17:33 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 8.3:[/glow]
“My friends, so light of foots, so swifts, you’ve come this fars. But nows, it’s time for you alls to splits up. You tribulations will be a most entertainings prequel to the battle that will ensues with any survivors… that is… if there are anys.” Ker-chunk! Pitfalls opened under out four would be heroes separating them from each other.
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Thud! Tony hit the floor hard. It was pitch black wherever he landed. There was another ker-chunk and Tony dived to the side hoping that another trap door hadn’t opened. A whirring noise filled the room and lights started to turn on. Mirrors, circus like mirrors, surrounded Tony; they all seemed distorted in some manner or another be it color or a slight bend in the glass. Tony looked at his reflections rather confused. Suddenly the mirrors reflections faded replaced by horribly cruel images. Tony looked between the images on the mirrors horrified. All the mirrors reflected Tony doing something or another that was just horrifying. He saw himself torturing his own mother in one mirror, in another he was killing off his own kind in masses of iron sand, in another he stomped Mikko flat. Choking Meerse, experimenting on demons, all this and more was reflected. Tony ran but no matter how fast he ran he couldn’t get away from the horrifying images. Soon sounds started playing as well, screams, bones crunching, flesh tearing, teeth gnashing. Tony just kept running and running until he fell over.
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Zeno found himself in a similar predicament. Instead of seeming Tony being cruel he saw himself killing some of the housemates. He wasn’t worried till he saw himself kill Mye at which point he promptly freaked out and started attacking the mirrors with his scythe. No matter how many mirrors he smashed more appeared. Several were out of his reach. Eventually he freaked and started running for his life from the evil images.
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Fear and Sorrow had near-identical experiences of seeing their births in test tubes under Hexavier’s watchful eyes. An alteration purposely fit into their genetic code to fight their own natures. Fear, birth name Annelie, was created with alp DNA from a loyalist faction member. Sorrow, birth name Zerachiel, was created from Scotodino DNA. Errors that existed in the coding sequence and just not thinking things through caused issues like Fear not having an alp hat and Sorrow having major anger issues from time to time. Of course it’s not like Fear and Sorrow knew about this in the first place so they went a little nuts and started running down their particular pathways destroying every mirror they passed along the way.
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 30, 2008 17:40:45 GMT -5
Wow. o.o A literal mad house there. I'm getting the title though.
Just wow.
So Hexavier created them? That's interesting.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2008 20:14:02 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 9: The End of the Beginning[/glow]
“Well, Wells. You alls made it outs. Surprisings. But I notices that you are tireds and I’m the ones with the gun.” Commandant Tonius laughed softly pulling his AMT AutoMag waving it from side to side theatrically.
All four tunnels opened up to the same room. Four doorways sitting side-by-side opened up to the large room of wood and red satin that Commandant Tonius awaited them. Sorrow entered the room from the leftmost passage, Fear entered from the rightmost passage, Tony and Zeno entered through the center passages nearest the girl that had previously “possessed” them.
“Lets sees here: Tony, worse for the wears, Zeno, you’re covereds in glass, Annelie, your alp beauty rivals Mye’s howevers you are not as loyals as your mother, Zerachiel, just what I expect from the uncivilizeds Scotodino withins you. Nows, who dies firsts?” Commandant Tonius raised his gun up slowly.
“Die monster!!!” Zerachiel dove right into Commandant Tonius line of sight and was rewarded with a bullet into the head. After a couple seconds of writhing in agony her body began to rip itself apart until she was no more.
“Well that was surprisings. Looks like she successfullys managed to disarms me. It’s jammeds.” Commandant Tonius tossed the AMT AutoMag to the side.
“Well den youse mines.” Tony turned into his werewolf form and Commandant Tonius who returned the favor in kind. Zeno and Annelie were left on the sidelines unable to figure out which was which.
“Tony. You are weaks!” Commandant Tonius punched Tony in the jaw then the gut and threw him back into Zeno, knocking Zeno into a wall. Annelie was then dumb enough to charge Commandant Tonius and was rewarded with a backhand slap into her face sending her into the hardwood paneling of the wall. “No challenge at alls. Not in alls the years since thats day. I thinks that it’s times to ends this.”
Commandant Tonius made for Annelie slowly. “I’ll shows you the price of disobediences.” He raised his hand high in the air bringing it down on Annelie. Just before he hit her there was a sound of compressed air being released and something pierced his hand. “Gah! Chavez!”
There in the doorway on the opposite side of the room from Tony and Zeno was another Zeno; in his hand was a nail gun. “Tonius. Brining other worlds into the fight. How like you.”
“Shuts up Chavez! You killeds her! You starteds this whole things you fool! I’ll kills you for what you dids!” Commandant Tonius charged at the Zeno with the nail gun.
“Tony, you were my best friend but. You are the fool.” Zeno pulled the trigger launching a nail into Commandant Tonius thigh.
“Gah! You cowards! Usings iron, fights like man.” Commandant Tonius held his wounded leg. “Well then. Computer activates protocol Electric Funeral!” A black vortex opened behind Commandant Tonius and he entered it. “Farewell Chavez.”
The portal closed and the building began to shake. The Zeno with the nail gun looked around. “Computer can this be overridden?”
“Sorry Prisoner 01011010 it cannot. I will however create a barrier around you all to protect you… good…bye…”
Black portals appeared all around Tony, Annelie, and the two Zenos. A large explosion issued. Outside anyone near the Ash fields were badly burned. Thankfully nobody was in the ash fields. When the smoke cleared Tony, Annelie, and the Two Zenos were at the base of a very, very, very, deep pit. The Zeno that had the nail gun woke up first and grabbed Annelie and vanished into a black vortex. Some time later Charby, Kavonn, and Hexavier located Tony and Zeno.
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 30, 2008 20:21:41 GMT -5
Wow. Very cool. So that's it then?
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2008 21:03:05 GMT -5
theres an epilogue to be written heres fear and sorrow Fear Sorrow
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Post by NightWing on Jul 30, 2008 23:40:19 GMT -5
Woo! I was kinda right! xD
Very interesting. Looking forward to the epilogue, only downside to that is it's over >_>
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2008 23:43:43 GMT -5
that was just part one night, surely you dont think i would be able to answer all the questions that would be rattling around right now with one chappy. also you need to try one of my avies XD
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Post by NightWing on Jul 30, 2008 23:53:53 GMT -5
xD
I was thinking about it earlier. I'll give 'em another look.
Ah ha, awesome ;D
And you're right, but I also wasn't sure if you'd end up answering them all anyway.
Woo for out of order responding! >_>
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 31, 2008 7:05:53 GMT -5
Coolie for the doll things.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2008 20:33:08 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Epilogue:[/glow]
“Results went as predicted Lord Hexavier. The Dimension Code has been retrieved. So you can use it any time now.”
Tik. Tikity tik tik tikity tik tikity tik. Tikitiktiktikity tik tik tikity tikity.
“Very well. What do you want to check?”
Tikitiktiktikity tik tik tikity tikity. Tik. Tikity tik tik tikity tik tikity tik. Tikitiktiktikity tik tik tikity tikity.
“Very well then. Oh, can you Dimension a tomato too? Yellow preferably.”
Tik tik tik tik.
Beep, boop, bloop, beebop, beepity beep. Whirrrrrrrrrrrr boom!
“Cough, Cough! Hexavier! Be careful you nearly killed me! And… hey it worked! I’m alive again! Death I cheat you once more! And… Hex what’s with this outfit? Gah, it doesn’t match my hair at all! Scissors, where are scissors?”
-Jingle of happy fun time passing-
“Ok then, now that everything’s settled lets get to the matter at hand.” Yet another meeting of The Black Knights had started Charby opening the meeting. “We have utterly failed to defend the forest from near doom. Instead Zeno saved us. Well Tony is a member so we quarter helped.”
“Half helped really. Master Hexavier was the one that let Tony out.” Zerachiel walked up behind Hexavier. Her hair was sheared up to her shoulders layered roughly so her horns were visible. Her outfit was a sleeveless shirt letting her wings out the back, strange though they looked for scotodino wings, and a long cut skirt with a split for mobility. Sandals covered her feet. She looked between the now very quiet, Kavonn, Charby, and Tony. “What? Never seen a girl before?”
“Hex… who is that?” Kavonn looked at Zerachiel suspiciously.
“She is an important ally and perhaps the only one who can accurately explain what happened recently.” Hex shrugged.
“Yes but I don’t feel like explaining right now. I’m going for a walk. I haven’t been able to go on a walk since… ever.” Zerachiel shrugged and made her wayout of the basement.
“Hey! It’s dangerous out there.” Charby teleported up to the top of the staircase, blocking Zerachiel path.
“Fine. Then I’ll take… him with me.” Zerachiel pointed at Zeno.
“Me?” Zeno looked at Zerachiel taken aback as she wrapped her arm around his.
“Kind sir, could you show a girl a good time?” Zerachiel walked out with an enthusiastic Zeno.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2008 20:35:27 GMT -5
and heres Sorrow yet again in epilogue format
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 31, 2008 20:38:13 GMT -5
*giggle* Well that's cool. Still a bit confused though.
So did Hexavier set this whole thing up?
I see. ^^
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2008 20:46:40 GMT -5
oh pish post sweets this hexavier did not know a thing until chapter... i forget... -checks- 6.3, chapter 6.3 what happened here that i forgot to mention is that Sorrow put a copy of herself in Tony's mind while staying in Hex's computer and when the copy was made to be physical the reall sorrow got a copy of the command and saved it in Hex's computer, which is a little more high tech in this universe
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 31, 2008 20:50:30 GMT -5
Okay. ^^ Now I get it. Thanky for explaining to my poor brain. *hugs*
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2008 20:53:25 GMT -5
-hugs poor brain- poor thing
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Post by NightWing on Jul 31, 2008 21:23:04 GMT -5
I'm still confused, but that's inevitable xD
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2008 21:37:27 GMT -5
indeed. explanations will be in the followup but that will be later. at the moment that will be a while though.
but i may let people know whats going on from time to time so they understand bits and pieces of everything thats happening.
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Post by NightWing on Jul 31, 2008 21:55:22 GMT -5
I'll wait, you seem to be good at the whole super complicated storyline gig
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