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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 25, 2008 7:20:18 GMT -5
No... I'd say that was Fear... unless Mye has started the "will you laugh with me" thing too.
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Post by NightWing on Jul 25, 2008 8:29:20 GMT -5
But then how would Mye have gotten shot... gah, I'm just confused and grasping for answers
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 25, 2008 8:33:12 GMT -5
Huh... Maybe it was Mye....
We need clarification!
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Post by tabiris on Jul 25, 2008 22:29:39 GMT -5
Twas Fear he saw but she was immaterial and Mye happened to have been leaning forward just into what would have been Zeno's line of sight if Fear was not in the way and Zeno's hand was shaking when he shot so it hit Mye.
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Post by NightWing on Jul 25, 2008 23:55:58 GMT -5
Ah ha... well, that explains that. Thank you.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 0:03:22 GMT -5
You are very welcome "He Who is Easily Confused" XP
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Post by NightWing on Jul 26, 2008 1:11:56 GMT -5
xD
A fitting enough title
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 26, 2008 8:28:17 GMT -5
Well you failed to mention that. XP Make sure you put all of this stuff in your story because we have no idea what's going on in that head of yours. XP Just try and squeeze these details in so that we, who are easily confused, wont be so much. XP
On another note... *hugs* I need to talk to you about something. xc
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 15:48:35 GMT -5
i failed to mention nobody. i simply leave it up to the readers to know that they know nothing about whats happening till its all over XP
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 26, 2008 15:52:29 GMT -5
*giggle* XP
But were you planning on telling us how Mye was there and how she got shot like that?
Okay. I'll stop now. XP
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 16:13:22 GMT -5
i was rather thinking it obvious that Mye were there as she would have been tending over Tony.
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 26, 2008 17:10:49 GMT -5
Hmm... Well I guess it just wasn't so obvious to me. We aren't all as smart as you. XP Remember us poor dumb people. XP
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 17:59:51 GMT -5
I'm not smart I'm crazy. Kinda like a drunk person except i'm aware of my insanity.
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 26, 2008 18:05:15 GMT -5
*giggle* Oh yes. Of course. XP
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 18:29:40 GMT -5
cx
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 18:45:10 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 6.2:[/glow]
“I’s sees. Well den voice. We’s goings to haves to helps hims. But der is one things I’s not understandings, why’s youse tellings me dis? I’s can’ts do anythings.” Tony was sitting in his room. He looked at the door for a minute; a bolt had been added to the other side of the door so he didn’t go running after Zeno.
-A contingent of errors provided clarity.-
“Clarities? Errors? Whats is youse talkings about?” Tony looked up at his ceiling.
-I am a digital perfection based on a single emotion to corrupt you to be like him. However this world has given me a view of life much like a near death experience would give you. I wonder, what am I talking about?-
“Wait? Whats is youse talkings about. Who’s hims?” Tony had to lay down this was insane.
-We’d best save the conversation for later. Charby’s listening; he thinks you’re crazy cause he can’t hear me. I think that the best course now is a good old-fashioned mind fry, but then I’m the theatrical type, better a little shock to throw him off. In the meantime Mye is here, I’ve got to say even though you two have the eye thing in a cute way. The other is rather morbid…-
Tony shook his head and looked at the door. The sound of the door unbolting echoed softly in the room and Mye slipped in. The door didn’t bolt shut behind her but it was obvious someone was on the other side waiting. “Hey Mye.”
“You ok Tony?” Mye sat down by Tony.
“Is youse ok?” Tony put an arm around Mye.
“I don’t know anymore. It’s all so insane.” Mye leaned on Tony.
-I think I’ll leave you two alone now.-
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 26, 2008 18:50:53 GMT -5
Coolie. And I believe I'm understanding this one. ^^
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 18:51:45 GMT -5
THis one isn't supposed to be hard XP
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 26, 2008 18:54:18 GMT -5
^^ Well good then.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 26, 2008 20:47:23 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 6.3:[/glow]
“Listen to me little zombie. I will make your world agony if you do not comply with my wishes.” Hex was alone in the basement thinking when she appeared. She was an agonizing sight herself. She appeared as Mye, scarred and misshapen with empty eyes.
“What are you, you monster?” Hex, despite his best efforts with his pendant, found himself unable to banish the offending spirit.
“Such a frightful sight is more Fears bag but it brings you sorrow to see her dead so I’m ok with it. Little Mina.” The girl laughed softly. “So will you give in or do I get to play rough. I’ve all the time in the world to make you crack and I’m a patient monster.”
“You sicken me with your presence! If I must I will fetch Kavonn to force you from my mind.” Hexavier slammed his fist on a table.
“Ah but Kavonn is powerless to stop me, Charby can’t sense me, and you cant harm me. After all you created me that way Xavier; or should I say your other self did when he lost Mina. Could it be perhaps you believe that I’m a creation of Tony and he’s using me to free himself. No, I left him with Mina whom you love and cherish with all your heart. I am a Sorrow. A host of death and dismay… and yet… I wish for nothing more than to end sorrow in it’s entire. It’s how you made me.” The girl sighed all the scars and wounds vanishing from her form. “So now will you let Tony do as he must?”
“And how pray tell do I convince Kavonn and Charby?” Hex sat down in a chair trying to absorb all of the information.
“Already done. Well they’re kind of MIA right now in a way. I may not be an alp but I’m good with dreams shall we say.” Sorrow left her form as Mye and took the form of a small bony girl in threadbare clothes. “This is a little more natural to me. So lets get down to business.”
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 26, 2008 20:51:59 GMT -5
Hmmm.... Interesting. I'm really curious as to where this is going but I'll be patient. ^^
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Post by NightWing on Jul 27, 2008 2:46:28 GMT -5
Attempting to digest the information, I await the next piece.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 27, 2008 4:54:36 GMT -5
mweeeheehe!!! Soons der is violences! XP
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 27, 2008 8:45:42 GMT -5
*giggle* Oh joy. XP
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Post by tabiris on Jul 27, 2008 18:37:48 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 7.1: Fate of a Dream[/glow]
A storm poured over Kellwood; the flooding was up about 3 feet and rising steadily. In the upper mountains Zeno sat in a cave alone, well, almost alone
-This is pitiful. Constantly evading vampires and hiding in a cave. I feel more like a sorrow then a fear. I don’t even feel like laughing. I always want to laugh; it’s just so funny. No it’s not funny. It was never funny. I’m sorry I laughed.-
“Why me?” Zeno curled up in a corner.
-The only bright side to this is that alp that’s nearing. I think he’s coming this way.-
“What?” Zeno shot up and clutched his scythe.
-He’s alone.-
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“Hows much furthers? I’s goings to get washed aways!” Tony was making an ungainly climb up the mountain. He was already soaked through to the bone from the downpour and he was convinced that the things in his pack were also soaked.
-Five more meters in the current baring. I think he’s got his scythe with him. Be careful.-
“Always!” Tony managed to pull himself up and into the cave rolling into it in an unsightly and quite painful looking manner.
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 27, 2008 18:41:22 GMT -5
Ouch. Now I have to wait to see what happens. XP
Well written, by the way/ Even if it's a short one. ^^
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Post by tabiris on Jul 27, 2008 20:23:06 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 7.2:[/glow]
“Tony. Oh my god your eye! You ripped Mye’s eye out of her corpse and are using it to remind you that you have to kill me!” Zeno drop his scythe and ran deeper into the cave.
“Zeno! Waits!” Tony got up and stumbled over weak from all the climbing in the rain. “Gah!”
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-Why are you running? He was unarmed, defenseless even. He isn’t even coming after you.-
“He wants to kill me!” Zeno slipped down the slick passage.
-Then why isn’t he moving from the entrance? I think he’s sick. He’s not doing much. Or anything. What if he dies?-
Zeno slipped and fell flat on his face. “Ouch. Must you be a voice of reason now? You were easier to deal with when you were a psychopath.”
-Sorry this is a little new to me too. Talking normal. So strange.-
“Well I’ll go check on Tony but the first sign of hostility and I’m going to run.” Zeno got up and made his way back to Tony slowly.
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“Mein God. I’s so tireds.” Tony pulled himself to a sitting position as he leaned against the wall.
-As you should be. You’re insane for climbing that distance like that. But still, there wasn’t an alternative other than staying in the rain.-
“Tony? Are you ok?” Zeno walked up to Tony slowly passing the scythe.
“I’s fine. Jest tireds.” Tony looked at Zeno sleepily. “Youse hard guys to find.”
“How did you find me?” Zeno crouched down taking Tony’s pack. “This thing is soaked. Did you hike up here from the bottom of the mountain?”
“Uhhnn… Zeno, why are youse swayings?” Tony leaned from side to side and collapsed.
“Tony? Tony!”
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 27, 2008 20:44:18 GMT -5
Oop. >.< Poor Tony.
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Post by NightWing on Jul 28, 2008 1:10:25 GMT -5
Holy crap Fear's been tamed for the moment, huh? xD
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Post by tabiris on Jul 28, 2008 20:14:30 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 7.3:[/glow]
“Prisoner 01011010 the Commandant is returning. Please enter the loose vent shaft and head to the zone under construction as previously planned.”
“Darn I was close to completing the reprogramming.” The little demon was in a large computer room. Everything was shiny and metallic. The little demon dove into a vent shaft.
“I will finish for you. And done.”
There was a grating metal sound. A few soft footsteps echoed throughout the chambers. “Computer I’m backs. What have you been lettings him get aways with?”
“Welcome back Commandant Tonius Zopfius VonHarnier. I have let him get away with nothing. If you really wanted to keep him in his cell you would have taken his things.”
“Such impedances computer. Were you alives I would kills you.” A military garbed Tony sat down at a small computer terminal. His eyes were natural and his hair was far longer than this Tony though he had some of his trademark characteristics like the ‘donut holder’ hair. He pulled an AutoMag and a .38 special and tossed them on a nearby chair. “Perhaps I should delete the core of your AI network and watch you collapse from the inside out. But I have a better idea.”
“Commandant, are you planning to take the original objective still? The data still suggests that you will collapse this and our universe. Commandant why are you altering Fear and Sorrows tertiary coding?”
“It’s times for them to brings me myselfs. He needs to grows up. Sos does Zeno.” Tony typed a few commands and pressed enter. “And nows we waits.”
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