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Post by volkodlakmojster on May 5, 2008 4:35:28 GMT -5
filler pages
instead of the bitten universe, theres a blank area, just completely white, in walks a person similar to JT in human form, and he turns towards the reader... "Ahem" he says, covering his mouth, "Hello, this is the mojster, but you all can just call me mojo. I am the writer of this comic as you may know, annd im sure there are some questions as to why i killed Omi off. Well, I just want to say that Omi is actually live and well." he then waves someone from outside of sight, and Omi walks into view, and waves, smileing, "Hey everyone! I need to go back to school for a while, and im not sure if Ill be back, but Mojo and I decided this was the best way out of the comic, I know you may have gotten angry at him, or sad i died, so we decided that it would be a good idea to come out and explain ourselves." she then smiles, "But, right now i need to pack, so ill be leaving." Mojo waves, and turns back to the readers, "well there you have it, everythings okay, Omis not dead, we just needed to write her out, but i need to continue the rest of the comic, so while im getting the next arc ready, im going to throw a few fillers out, maybe ill post some fanart, or fan comics, ive yet to decide, till then, this is the mojster saying sorry for any shock, or sadness i may have put you through, and im sure we will meet again." he then waves, and the scene blanks out into the comic logo.
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Post by ogrefairy on May 5, 2008 4:48:55 GMT -5
*giggle* Got this all planned out I see. XP
You should really start drawing them! I think it would be so cool for you to do it yourself. You're pretty good and maybe you can get angel or Zee-zo or someone to teach you how to do digital stuff, *shrugs*
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Post by NightWing on May 5, 2008 16:42:01 GMT -5
Listen to her, she has good ideas xD
I agree, but the digital part isn't important in my opinion. Non digital stuff works just as well
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jun 30, 2008 16:24:12 GMT -5
Bitten, story arc 3 page 1
ashes to ashes...(an overhead view of a graveyard) dust to dust...(a closed casket with flowers and a photograph on top) this young woman...(a close up of the photograph, omis picture) is no longer with us...(a close up of a tombstone) she leaves behind...(the minister) family and friends...(a split picture of a family portrait, and the guys) here they all gather....(overhead view of the mourners) to make their final amends...(someone dropping a flower onto the casket) some of them grieving...(omis mother sobbing on her fathers shoulder, tears in her fathers eyes) some of them stunned...(one of the mourners just staring blankly at the casket) but two of them realize...(matt, and Aaron looking at an empty chair between them) that someone is missing.(a bottle of whiskey, empty, and J.Ts hat on the kitchen table at the apartment, J.T in the background, "I’m sorry Omi")
After the funeral, Matt, and Aaron come home to the apartment, finding empty liquor bottles. "J.T?" Aaron calls out, "You here? You missed Omis funeral.." At the realization of what he just said, Aaron's face slumped, as Matt checked all the rooms, "I found him!" he said as he opened Omi's bedroom door, seeing J.T passed out on the floor, pictures and keepsakes of Omi's scattered around him, "I think he's passed out." Aaron sadly helped Matt carry him to his room, as he said, "I really hope he's OK, I mean.. he had such a sad look, I’m afraid he might do something to himself." they then closed the door on their way out, leaving J.T to sleep restlessly.
J.T Is standing in the middle of pitch blackness, Looking around before he realizes he's in human form, "W..where am I? what is this place?" he says to the pitch blackness, not noticing that a strange red glow was beginning to emanate from behind him, he slowly turns towards this glow, which turn out to be a pair of glowing red eyes, "why, hello "J.T"." comes a booming demonic voice, "welcome to my domain."
J.T still stares in shock at the eyes, "Wh..who are you?" he says, his fear growing as he seems to realize the answer. "I’m sure you have realized that by now" says the voice, "I am the bringer of death to all of your friends and family, the puppet master if you will of your life since you have been bitten, your inner demon." the voice continues as an image appears around the eyes, J.T in halfling form, but much, much uglier, and meaner looking, "Why, I’m the real you, and Its almost time.." J.T shook his head, backing away, eyes wide with terror as the demon laughed, and J.T turned to run, only to find out he was surrounded by images of the laughing demon, and they were closing in as he began to scream.
J.T woke up in the dark, screaming, and falling out of his bed, sheets twisted around him, and Aaron burst through the door, turning on the light as J.T realized where he was, "J.T! Are you okay?" J.T looked around, breathing heavily, slightly dazed, "I..I.." he started before closing his eyes, and taking a deep breath, "I’m fine, j..just a nightmare" Aaron nodded slightly, still worried, "Well... try to get some more sleep, and if there's anything you need to talk about.." J.T shook his head, "I’m fine, don't worry" with that Aaron left, and J.T listened for his door to close before pulling a small bottle of whiskey out, and taking a big swig of it, staring at the wall.
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Post by NightWing on Jun 30, 2008 16:30:39 GMT -5
Dang... ominous events here Very nicely done as usual, lookin' forward to seeing this coninue to move... if for no other reason so I can know how exactly everything happens xD You're very good at creating suspense with this stuff
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Post by ogrefairy on Jun 30, 2008 17:07:48 GMT -5
Wow. Very interesting.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jun 30, 2008 17:13:01 GMT -5
thanks you two, id like to say a lot of thought went into this, but i kinda just wrote what came to me at the time, it was neat actually, like each section fed the next
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jun 30, 2008 22:13:32 GMT -5
bitten, arc 3 page 2
A few days later... Aaron and Matt are standing outside J.Ts door, "We gotta snap him out of this funk, he hasnt left his room for anything but going to the liquer store, and useing the bathroom..." said Aaron, "And i dont think hes been sleeping, those nightmares hes been having seem pretty bad, worse every time." suddenly theres a moan, and bottles clinking together, and J.Ts door opens, revealing J.T with no shirt on, and his hair disheveled, and a full beard, "Whatre you two doing outside my door?" he slurred before collapseing.
Aaron, and Matt dragged J.T to the couch, and set him onto it, "Matt, dump all the booze, we need him to sober up...." Matt nodded and began to walk towards the kitchen, "Includeing your "secret" stash" Matt looked at Aaaron with a sour look, but went to his room anyway. Meanwhile J.T had begun to twist and turn on the couch.
Its black again, And J.T is standing in the middle, looking around, "Oh no. No, not this place again!" he says, "Ive been avoiding this place for days.." Just then the demons voice booms from the darkness, "You know you cannot avoid me forever J.T, Or should I call you Ju..." "shut up!" screamed J.T, shaking with fear, "Get out of my head! Leave me alone!" At that the demon snarled, coming out of nowhere as a huge black wolf, and pinning J.T.
"You Are not in controll here!" she demon snarled, "I pull the strings! I dont know how you are able to repress me while awake, but when you are asleep, you are mine, and i will break your soul, I have allready had controll once, and when i get it again, im going to KILL that spyco cousin of yours, and your drunkard friend, just like that witch you loved." Tears in his eyes J.T sqweezed them shut, "O..Omi..I...I....no..no more!" J.T yelled, opening his tear filled eyes, which glowed with a white hot intensity.
J.T threw the demon off of him, clawing at it in his halfling form, "You wont hurt anymore of my friends! I wont let you ever take over again!" The demon began to Laugh as J.T clawed at him, "Thats it, get angry, the more you lose yourself to anger the more I controll you, Just look at yourself, no longer human in your own mind." J.T froze, looking at his hands, "N..no...What..."he said. "You still dont get it do you? I am not a seperate being, I AM YOU!" said the demon attacking once more, "I am your every hatefull feeling, every hurtfull emotion, I am your evil side, And your anger, your pain feeds me, makes me stronger, And when I have enough power to take full controll, you will no longer be needed, and every one you love WILL die by your hands."
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Post by NightWing on Jul 1, 2008 9:03:37 GMT -5
Hoo boy... this is not going well. And the cliffhanger endings again xD
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 3, 2008 0:23:08 GMT -5
bitten, story arc 3 page 3
"NOOOOO!" J.T screamed, falling off the couch, and hitting his head off the coffe table, he sat up slowly, rubbing his as he looked around the dark apartment, "Whats happening to me? These dreams seem so real.." He then stood up, and walked to the kitchen, eyes dimly glowing, as if still a bit out of it, and he hit the light switch on the wall, seeing the empty bottles in the kitchen, he shook his head, "Maybe its all the booze" he then pulled out a pack of smokes and lit one on the stove.
Taking a drag from the smoke J.T started picking up the bottles, "I must have been on a long bender, or aaron made matt dump his stash" J.T said, a sad look still in his eyes as he walked past the table to toss the bottles into the trash, but as he walked past the table, a mirror on the wall behind it showed his reflection stopping, and grinning evilly, eyes turning red as it faced outward.
J.T later walked out of his room, putting his hat on, and scratched his beard, "I think its time to try doing something." he said as he moved towards the bathroom, and started to get his trimmers out to shave his beard, but as he glenced in the mirror he had to do a double take, yelling out as he punched at the reflection of the demon, shattering the mirror as the demons laugh echoed through the apartment.
"It cant be.. hes real..." said J.T, stareing at the tiny reflections in the broken mirror, "I cant let him take controll..but i cant beat him.." he said, hishand bleeding in the sink, tears filling his eyes, "Th..theres only..one way.." he said, picking up a large piece of the mirror, "Only one way to protect my friends.."
Meanwhile, outside on the fire escape the unknown woman from the park is climbing towards the window when she hears a crash from inside, and startled she slowly moves towards the window, just in time to see J.T from behind as he lifts the pice of mirror, and slashes his throat, "No!" she says, busting out the window, and running to him as he collapses on the floor.
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Post by NightWing on Jul 3, 2008 1:18:56 GMT -5
Holy crap. How's he get outta this one?
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 3, 2008 8:44:29 GMT -5
O.O Wow..... this sure has gotten intense.
... that's a lot of drinking and then smoking. *twitch* Okay... I'll shut up now. XP
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Post by tabiris on Jul 3, 2008 13:20:24 GMT -5
woot 4 updates.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Jul 3, 2008 20:11:08 GMT -5
sweet!
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 5, 2008 18:14:46 GMT -5
Bitten, story arc 3 page 4
blackness.. inky blackness is everything, in this dark theres a voice... "stupid, very stupid.." the voice said, an unfamilliar voice, "You could have just lost yourself completely." suddenly the blackness brightens to a bright, near blinding light, And J.T in halfling form shields his eyes, "W..who are you?" he said, blinking. "Well, youve met the demon.. the evil in your mind and heart." the voice said, "well, Im your human soul, the good in your heart." then the soul comes into view, J.Ts human form, but wearing all white instead of his normal black.
"M..my human soul?" said J.T with a confused look, "This is getting very complicated" he said as he sank to the "ground" "I..I wish Omi were still..." J.T started to cry once more, "I dont want this, I never did, A..and now.. my friends are in danger.. because of me..." J.Ts soul kneeled down next to him, "They are not in danger because of you, It was not your fault that this happened, and the demon within you can not win unless you give up, which is what you have just tried to do, If you had suceeded in killing yourself all you would have done was lost me, your soul, and given the demon full controll.
"B..but.. im.. allready dead.. arent i?" said JT. "You dont know much of anything about what you are now, do you?" said J.Ts soul, "Werewolves can only be killed for good with silver, if killed by conventional means they just lose control, but luckily you are special, you see, you have me, the demon couldnt destroy me, and because of your ancestry, and choices you have made in life, i am stronger than him, no at the moment neither of us controll you, but we advice on your decisions, and who gains power depends on who you listen to." He then stood up and began to walk away as J.T said, "Wait.. whats that about my ancestry?" but the soul continued to walk as the brightness faded.
J.T opened his eyes slowly as Aaron yelled out "Hes coming to! J.T, are you okay? you scared the shit out of us!" J.T blinked and his eyes went wide as he sat up quickly and looked around, "W..what happened?" he said in a weak gravelly voice, wincing as he felt the half healed slice in his throat. "You did something stupid, thats what, Its a good thing shawna happened to see you through the window." J.T blinked and said, winceing a bit, "Shawna? whos Shawna?" as the woman who came to his rescue came in, left eye covered by her long hair, "Im Shawna... Shawna Wulf.
J.T nodded, "Thank you." he said laying down, "but.. im so tired right now.." he then slowly fell asleep as Aaron nodded and guided Shawna out into the living room, "Look.. Im glad you were here when he needed you, but.. im not sure why youre here, I think he might not want to meet you if he knew who exactly you were." Shawna looked down sadly, "I..I just... I dont know, I guess I wanted to apologize and explain that i wasnt in control of myself that night.. but what am I going to say to him? "sorry I turned you into a werewolf."?" she said, looking out the window, her bad eye visible as tears ran from her eyes.
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 5, 2008 18:31:50 GMT -5
Wow. Interesting.
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Post by NightWing on Jul 6, 2008 2:55:49 GMT -5
Dang... questions questions and more questions xD
Nicely written, as per usual
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 7, 2008 16:19:36 GMT -5
bitten, story arc 3 page 5
Shawna sat on the couch, head in her hands as Aaron set a drink down in front of her, "what's the deal now? You’ve been following us around? why did you wait so long to come forward?" he said, sitting down. "I..I was afraid that you would try to kill me or something," shawna said "a lot of myths say that if you kill the sire of a werewolf the werewolf in question is cured of the curse, but.. I found that it isn't true, my friends back when I was bitten hunted my sire down believing the myths, but it didn’t work. So I left my home a long time ago, and ive been wandering ever since." Aaron nodded, and said, "well, I’m not sure how JT would react to you if you tell him your full story, but.. you’re welcome to stay for a while, just hold off on telling anyone else what you told me." Aaron said, "and don't let me catching you doing anything else to hurt my cousin, or I will kill you."
A few hours later, shawna is sitting on the couch when she hears a guitar playing from JT's room, "JT must be up.." she said, switching to her human form, and walking to his room. "JT?" she said, knocking on the door, causing the music to stop as JT suddenly swings the door open, eyes wide, "O..oh.. its you.. Shawna was it?"he said, hif face falling. Shawna nodded and said, "Who did you think it was? you looked really happy for a minute there." JT sat heavily on the bed, his guitar next to him, "I thought you were Omi for a second...you sound a lot like her." said JT with tears in his eyes, he then looked at Shawna, "I loved her you know, she meant everything to me..and she's gone because of this...this curse.." at that Shawna flinched, seeming close to tears as JT continued, "I sometimes wish I could find the monster that did this to me... I would enjoy killing it.."
I..I have to go.." said Shawna, tears running down her face as she ran from the room, thinking, "I cant tell him.. not now, he would kill me before I could explain myself.. and I don't blame him, he's right.. I..we.. are both monsters now.." she then Opened the apartment door, and ran head long into Matt, "whoa! watch it!" he said as she knocked him over, "who are you?" Shawna wiped away her tears real quick before answering, "I..I’m Shawna.. Shawna wulf.. I just stayed to see if JT was okay after he hurt himself, but.. I don't think I belong here anymore." Matt noded a bit before saying, "Wait..what? JT hurt himself?"
JT came to the living room, coughing a bit as he took a drag from a cigarette, "Don’t worry matt, I’m fine, In fact, I think im a lot better now" he said slowly, "You don't have to leave Shawna, you can stay here as long as you need, you look like you need a place, and we need a new room mate." Matt looked at JT and said, "You seem to have gotten over Omi pretty well" JT smiled sadly, and shook his head, "I don't think ill ever be over Omi, but.. I think I’ve spent enough time feeling sorry.. I need to move on, and make the best of things."
meanwhile, At the edge of town, three cloaked figures appear. "This is the place?" one of them said in a low scratchy voice. Another nodded, "Yes, this is where the werewolf resides, the bounty on his head will do us nicely." "however, it is a shame we must keep him alive." said the third one, "we could use the power he has. I can feel it from here."
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 7, 2008 19:59:33 GMT -5
Hmmm... Getting interesting though I think the character of Shawna has really changed since what you first made her out to be. Here she most seems like a scare girl rather then the stronger woman I thought she was portrayed as before. She seems a lot younger.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 7, 2008 20:03:06 GMT -5
well, shes pretty much the same, but due to how bad she feels about what shes done, and seeing JT try to take his life shes kind of vulnerable at the moment, but she can still fight, and rarely takes crap from anyone, im trying to sort of make her out to seem one way then suprise everyone later, i still havent revealed anything of her past in detail eather, so she may be sorting through her own demons still, which is resolved by the time you know her from the rps
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 7, 2008 20:06:43 GMT -5
Hmmm... I see but see still seems to be portrayed as much younger. Earlier when you introed her, you said girl and she just seems to be a girl that is going through emotional trouble. I just thought that she was supposed to be older.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 7, 2008 20:09:48 GMT -5
well, I kinda say girl as a general term for a femail, its a habit of mine, but shes supposed to appear to be in her early twentys
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 7, 2008 20:13:32 GMT -5
I understand. Her behavior, along with that girl reference though really makes her seem more like someone in her late teens.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 7, 2008 20:15:48 GMT -5
*nods* i never realized that.. but i guess youre right now that i read over it again
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 7, 2008 20:26:13 GMT -5
*shrugs* It's just the impression that I got. You'll have to wait for others opinions. I could be wrong.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 7, 2008 20:29:25 GMT -5
*shrug* i guess, im not gonna re write it though, ill just develope her from here i think
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Post by ogrefairy on Jul 7, 2008 20:32:14 GMT -5
Alright Though you may want to edit the girl from where you first meet her so that it gives a better first impression.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Jul 7, 2008 20:51:41 GMT -5
true
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Post by tyrone on Jul 7, 2008 22:52:02 GMT -5
Varry good. Just rereading...
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Oct 16, 2012 23:54:03 GMT -5
after what? 5 years? ive come up with more ideas for this, but im not sure if i should continue or start from scratch, what does everyone think?
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