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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 17, 2007 3:45:30 GMT -5
ok.. seeing as how averyone wants to see my comic, but i cant get the drawings right, im gonna turn it into a written story for now, here goes i hope it doesnt suck... there is some swearing in the origionall, ill go thru and edit tho...
Bitten.
J.T, Matt, and Aaron were at Aaron’s hunting cabin celebrating the purchase of their apartment. J.T was done drinking for the night, so he was just sitting on the couch and whittling at the arm with the silver bladed switchblade that his friend had given him as a gift earlier that day. “Hey you guys, I'm gonna head home for the night, ok?” Aaron looked at him swaying “why? Its only midnight, There’s still lots of drinkin ta do!” “Nah,” said J.T standing up” I’m leavin, see ya!” Matt picked his head up and said “what a party pooper!” before passing out on the table. J.T just smirked and walked out the door.
J.T was walking through the woods slightly buzzed from the alcohol. “Man” he said lighting up a cigarette” I had fun tonight, that was a great idea to get that whiskey.”
Just then he heard a rustle behind him. ”Huh?” he said turning towards the sound “What was that?” The rustling continued and he walked closer to the sound. “Aaron? Is that you?” he said. Just as a huge white wolf with glowing white eyes leapt out and sunk its fangs into his shoulder.
“Aaaagghhh!!” yelled J.T falling backwards onto the ground. “Oh god! This thing is gonna eat me!” he thought struggling against the wolf. The wolf then started to drag J.Ts kicking form through the woods, when J.T remembered the knife in the pocket of his jean jacket. ”Maybe if I can, got it! Thought J.T. he pulled it out and hit the button popping the blade and sunk it deep into the wolfs left eye. With a twist he pulled the knife back out and the wolf yelping slunk away.
J.T ran back towards the cabin, holding his shoulder, trying to stop the bleeding. “Oh god, what was that!” he thought starting to fade in and out of consciousness. “I’m loosing a lot of blood, I…I think I’m gonna die!” He made it to the cabin and started frantically banging on the door. “Please open up!” He thought.
Aaron was listening to the softly playing radio, and listening to Matt talk in his sleep when someone started banging on the door. “Who the he** could that be?” He said walking to the door. Just as he got to the door the banging stopped. “huh, why would someone bang like that then stop?” he said as he turned the door knob. He opened the door and J.T fell into the room covered in blood. “Oh s**t! Matt, get up! J.Ts hurt!”
To be continued….
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 17, 2007 4:47:06 GMT -5
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Very cool!
I likey! I told you that you could write!
;D
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 17, 2007 5:00:05 GMT -5
thanx O.F!......
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Post by Amelius on Sept 17, 2007 5:07:19 GMT -5
Ooo, good atmosphere and narration of the action. It's a good sign when you can picture these things as you read them! Great work! (good to have a trusty knife around when you needs it!)
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 17, 2007 5:12:40 GMT -5
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Sept 17, 2007 15:47:34 GMT -5
Shweet! so that's his story:D
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Post by tabiris on Sept 17, 2007 16:52:05 GMT -5
Very nice.
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Post by NightWing on Sept 17, 2007 17:15:04 GMT -5
Don't have anything to add to what's been said already, so I'll just state that I agree! ;D
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 17, 2007 17:32:57 GMT -5
huh *basks in complimentary goodness* i shoulda done this a while ago!!
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 17, 2007 17:40:49 GMT -5
*giggle*
Don'tcha just feel loved!
Your writing deserves that 100%
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 17, 2007 18:08:26 GMT -5
funny though...... i took special ed english  , the only two streamline english classes i had i failed! |
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 17, 2007 18:09:39 GMT -5
Well then they just failed to see your brilliance!
Their loss!
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Post by NightWing on Sept 17, 2007 19:57:47 GMT -5
Perhaps it's just your mechanics that are off, spelling and grammar and stuff like that, you have a very good mind for creative writing from the looks of things though ;D
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 17, 2007 20:28:19 GMT -5
yeah, i love spelling and grammar check programs! ;D
interesting fact: my reading skills were at collage levels in third grade!
just plain weird: if you look at the tekt for my story and unfocus your eyes, it looks like a wolf! i just noticed that!!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 17, 2007 20:30:33 GMT -5
looks like a lion to me. though i took my glasses of and thats as unfocused as it gets
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 17, 2007 20:32:37 GMT -5
OMG your right!
O.O
*is still staring at the screen*
WOW!
... I didn't really start reading until 7th grade when we made a serious move... then I was enveloped in books... No one ever saw me without one... I've read all kinds of interesting stuff... I've kinda calmed down on my reading since I moved here...
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 18, 2007 2:30:43 GMT -5
okay heres the next entry to the story...
Bitten, part 2
Aaron and Matt got J.T into the car and sped to the hospital. On the way there J.T suddenly started to scream. “What’s wrong? J.T whets wrong? Yelled Aaron from the drivers seat. J.T lay across the back seat writhing in pain, and matt looked back just in time to see J.T open his eyes. “I… I think I drank too much Aaron, h..His eyes are black!” “What?” Aaron said looking back, and sure enough J.Ts eyes were black! J.T stopped screaming and slowly sat up. “J.T? Are you ok?” said Aaron J.T looked around then at Aaron and said in a deep growling voice “I’m fine.” And then attacked him.
Aaron, just thinking of survival let go of the wheel and tried to fight J.T off.
“Get off of me! This isn’t you!” he yelled as the car screeched across the highway. Matt stunned by what he was seeing looked out the window just in time to see the car heading towards oncoming traffic. “Shit!” he yelled while grabbing for the wheel. He yanked the wheel hard and this sent the car skidding sideways catching a wheel in a pothole and causing the whole car to roll three times.
Matt, being the only one to wear his seatbelt climbed out of the overturned car, and saw Aaron laying in the road and a few feet further lay J.T unconscious. Matt stumbled over to Aaron and checked to see if he was still breathing, he was, but he was out cold. He wanted to check on J.T, but after what he saw he was afraid to.
“Uuunnnnnhhh” moaned J.Tas he slowly got up rubbing his head “what happened? What am I doin on the edge of the highway?” he started to get up and noticed his hands. “What the?” his fingernails had grown into claws and had turned black what’s going on here? He said noticing that his teeth were sharper. I gotta get a mirror he said crawling to the car he glanced over and saw matt sitting on the side of the road and Aaron just waking up. When he got to the car he looked into the cracked rearview, oh my god!” he exclaimed seeing his face, his eyes glowed white and his teeth had grown into fangs, looking further he noticed his ears now had a point to them. What happened to me? What am I?”
Aaron woke to matt shaking him” Aaron, we gotta get outta here, the cops will be here any minute!” “What about J.T?” he said. “He’s lost it man, he’s just staring into the mirror on the car mumbleing” said matt pointing at J.T. “well we cant just leave him here, he’s still my cousin, and your best friend, you go take the plate off the car and ill go try to talk to him.
J.T? You okay buddy?” said Aaron as he walked slowly up to J.T. J.T looked at him and said, “What happened? I’m walking through the woods… and I remember a wolf, then I wake up on the side of the highway and I, I look like THIS” he said pointing at the mirror “look, I know a lot has happened, but weve gotta get outta here, theres most likely cops coming, me and aaron are drunk, weve got a totaled car and im sure you don’t wanna go to jail looking like that do ya?” said aaron. “Your right” said J.T “ we gotta get outta here, where is here anyway?
More to come….
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 7:36:51 GMT -5
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Wow very awesome!
Amelius was right was she spoke of you being able to visualize what's going on!
Your writing is just that good!
*hugs Mojo*
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Post by NightWing on Sept 18, 2007 7:47:15 GMT -5
So, he's in the halfling form right now then. Lost with a totaled car, and a freshly turned werewolf. This doesn't seem like it's going to end well xD
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 18, 2007 8:42:25 GMT -5
he doesnt know how to control his forms yet.....he doesnt even know whet he is...
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 12:12:56 GMT -5
fun fun.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 19, 2007 11:56:55 GMT -5
and now comes tha dance number!!!!......................just kidding....
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Post by tabiris on Sept 19, 2007 13:39:35 GMT -5
that would be both Humorous and Mortifying
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 19, 2007 13:41:15 GMT -5
Very much of both! ^^
No seriously...
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 19, 2007 13:50:24 GMT -5
here is the next chapter..... i forgot to mention, that each paragraph is one page of the comic....
Bitten 3
Once they were far enough from the accident J.T stopped running, and sat on the ground at the base of a tree, staring at his hands. “Hey, J.T” said Aaron, “I don’t know what happened to you, but you know were here for ya no matter what, right?” “ Yeah, I know” said J.T still looking at his hands “I just wish I knew what happened to me” “I know what happened” said a voice from behind them.
All three of them spun around to face the voice. Recognizing the figure J.T said “Omi?” she walked up to J.T and touched his face sadly “ I was hoping that this wouldn’t happen, that’s why I gave you that knife, I was trying to help you prevent it.” “What are you talking about?” said matt, “you knew this would happen?” “Well I knew that J.T would be bitten, and I knew that he would end up here, but in my vision he had killed the both of you” she said sadly “the knife must have helped him get to you sooner, keeping him from changing too soon.” “But I would never-“ “yes you would if you were in the wrong state of mind” Omi said interrupting J.T. J.T looked at Aaron, but Aaron couldn’t look him in the eye “ I went after you didn’t I?” Aaron’s silence told him all he needed to know, “oh god, what have I become?
Omi told them what happened on the way to her campsite. “ In short she said sadly “ you have become a werewolf, you are a rarity though, in that you still have a human soul” “ but I thought werewolves looked human normally?” said matt “they do, and I don’t know what happened there,” she said then looked at J.T “I want you to try something. Try to picture your human body and just focus on what you looked like. It may change you back into human form, at least temporarily” J.T then closed his eyes and concentrated. Matt And Aaron stood in stunned silence as J.T slowly changed back into the friend that they always new. J.T slowly opened his brown eyes and asked, “Did it work?”
The story of Omi and J.T earlier that day is coming next…
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 19, 2007 13:57:41 GMT -5
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Wow! More story! Very interesting... This Omi girl appears to know a lot more than everyone else!!
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 19, 2007 13:59:04 GMT -5
this is the only chapter i just did winging it..... i had nuthin fer after the accident ta be honest >_>
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 19, 2007 14:00:08 GMT -5
Hey it works!
To be honest seeing this in comic from will be interesting.
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 19, 2007 14:01:36 GMT -5
interesting how?
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 19, 2007 14:03:39 GMT -5
In a good way silly!
I think it will be interesting to see how you are seeing this all come to past compared to the images I have in my mind already!
Yeah... I'm weird like that...
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, the only two streamline english classes i had i failed!