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Post by volkodlakmojster on Sept 19, 2007 14:08:33 GMT -5
oh ok... i try to get it on paper as close to as its in my head as possible..... picture the car crash in slowmo, thats how i pictured it ;D
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 19, 2007 14:11:42 GMT -5
Y'okay!
Hey two pages!
*staying on subject*
I'm sure how ever you get it done will be great!
^^
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Post by NightWing on Sept 19, 2007 17:17:09 GMT -5
That's always a good goal, to picture it and make it come out as close as possible, something that you seem to be very good at, from the mental pictures that keep forming as I read, whether they're the same as yours is anyone's guess, but it's interesting and I'm enjoying it, so keep up the good work
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Post by tabiris on Sept 22, 2007 20:24:46 GMT -5
*gets a tub of popcorn and watches*
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 22, 2007 20:28:42 GMT -5
*steals some of Tabiris's popcorn*
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Post by tabiris on Sept 22, 2007 20:36:25 GMT -5
*smiles because the popcorn is arsenic flavor but not really made of arsenic*
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 22, 2007 20:41:52 GMT -5
*spits out arsenic flavored popcorn*
Blahhhhhhhh!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 22, 2007 20:53:35 GMT -5
What. I like the taste of death.
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 22, 2007 21:01:45 GMT -5
*sticks tongue out at Tabiris while waiting for the next chapter*
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Post by tabiris on Sept 22, 2007 21:04:47 GMT -5
the butter popcorn is in the cupboard next to the zombie flesh.
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 22, 2007 21:18:47 GMT -5
Hee hee hee!
*takes some and eats it*
*staying on topic*
MOJO'S STORY IS AWESOME AND WILL BE A COOL COMIC!
*giggle*
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Sept 27, 2007 17:17:37 GMT -5
Nice:D
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Oct 1, 2007 22:28:34 GMT -5
everytyme i start the next page my puter freezes... so it may take a while...
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Oct 9, 2007 0:48:10 GMT -5
okay update tyme.... i just finished it..... it took me a half an hour....
Bitten 4
Earlier that day J.T was standing on Omis front porch, drinking iced tea, and talking to Omi. “What did you want to talk to me about, Omi?” said J.T taking a sip of his tea before lighting a cigarette. She said, “ I just wanted to see you before… before you left for your party” “well.” Said J.T looking at the ember on the end of his smoke “I'm here, what do you want to say? You want to go with me now?” “No” she said. “I just wanted to give you this” and she placed the silver bladed switchblade into his hand “I want you to keep this on you for protection.” J.T looked confused as he said, “protection from what?” she just looked at hum sadly and said “you’ll find out soon enough” and setting her drink down she hugged him tightly, causing J.T to once again wonder why she wouldn’t go out with him.
Back in the present time J.T was waiting for an answer to his question “well? Did it work or not?” matt and Aaron both said “yeah. “at the same time. J.T looked at himself in a mirror that Omi had at the campsite and was relieved to see that he had gone completely back to normal, “thank god.” He said, “At least I don’t have to walk around like a freak!” then he started to feel tired, as if his energy was slowly being sucked out of his body. “What’s wrong with me?” he said as he fell to the ground, out cold
J.T woke up the next morning to Omi running water over his forehead soothingly. “What happened?” He asked her, “Why did I just pass out all of a sudden?” she said “I think that your human form may be taking up energy to hold it, I have never seen a werewolf that had a halfling form as its natural form.” J.T looked at her and said, “how long have you known this would happen?” she looked away saying, “Since you first asked me out”. “But that was three years ago!” said J.T “why didn’t you just tell me not to go?” “Because it would have altered your destiny, its already altered due to me giving you that knife. “She said. “Is that why you said no?” J.T asked softly. Omi just looked away with tears in her eyes.
The rest of that day Omi tried to teach J.T how to shift his forms while Aaron and Matt slept off their night of drinking, and the effects of the accident. “Okay, so let me get this straight,” said J.T “if I want to change to human all I have to do is think hard?” “It should be the same with your wolf form,” said Omi. Okay ill try my wolf form I guess” said J.T. “wate, go behind my jeep and change, it will most likely shred your clothes “she said blushing. “Okay” said J.T also blushing and he went behind the jeep and shed his clothes as he thought about what a wolf would look like and slowly he shifted into a big black wolf with sharp teeth and white eyes. He then walked around the side of the jeep on all fours and tried to speak to her “think what you want to say” she said. J.T tried it and said, <this feels weird>
More on the way in the future…………..
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Post by NightWing on Oct 9, 2007 0:53:37 GMT -5
Ah, the "discovering powers" phase. As usual, well-written mojo. Lookin' forward to the rest. ;D
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Post by Wolfy on Oct 9, 2007 1:31:04 GMT -5
It's very nice, though the dialog is a bit difficult to read... perhaps try separating them when it's different people speaking? ^^;
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Oct 9, 2007 6:33:51 GMT -5
nice:D
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 9, 2007 9:07:54 GMT -5
Yay! More story!
It is very well written and I am very intrigued!
Though I do agree... It would be easier to read if you separated the dialog...
I still love it though! ^^
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Oct 9, 2007 15:26:43 GMT -5
you guys want it eritten like a script or something? im confuzzled.... i write like i see stuff written in books
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Post by tabiris on Oct 9, 2007 15:30:24 GMT -5
i think they mean something like the latest bit i did of my fanfic.
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 10, 2007 4:57:59 GMT -5
Still like in a book... Just like paragraph separation between when different people are speaking... just so there is no confusion and we an fully appreciate your genius!
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Oct 31, 2007 12:45:20 GMT -5
okay, i tried taking everyones advice on this one, its a bit boring, but the next one will be more exciting....
Bitten 5
omi looked down at J.T and said, "You look beautiful!" <really? i feel really weird though.> replyed J.T "well thats understandable, i mean walking on all fours, and im sure you have hightened senses now" said Omi, pondering what it must feel like. <well im gonna change back now, okay?> said J.T figiting. Omi nodded and J.T went back behind the jeep, and changed back, a few minuts later he walked out, putting his still shredded jacket back on, "well, that was "fun"."he said. suddenly there was a yell from the tent and aaron jumped out saying, "what the he**! Why were you spooning with me?" J.T and Omi looked at eachother and burst out laughing.
the whole trip back to the apartment Aaron and Matt kept as far away as possible in the back seat of the jeep, while J.T chuckled to himself at random times. "does that happen a lot?" asked Omi giggleing "what? the spooning, or the outbursts?" said J.T with a smile. "The outbursts." replyed Omi smileing "surpriseingly, yes." laughed J.T, "but seriously, back to the matter of this "curse", is there a cure?" "sadly, no not yet."said Omi sadly, "but i will try to help find one in any way possible, even if it means studying black magic." "black magic?" said J.T, suprised, "magic is real? and there is a difference?" "of course" said Omi smiling at J.T, eyes glowing.
once at the apartment, aaron and matt went straight to there rooms, and slammed the doors, while J.T looked for something to eat, and Omi sat at the kitchen table. "man, im hungry all of a sudden" said J.T, grabbing an apple, "this will do i guess"he then took a bight out of it, then grimaced and spit it out into the trash, "ugh, that tasted horrible!" "well it may be that you are a carnivore now, and that apple isnt meat" said Omi. "great! Not only am i part wolf now, i have the diet of one." J.T said rolling his eyes ant tossing the apple in the trash,"im still hungry though" he then looked in the fridge some more, and found some hamburger, "here we go" he then pulled it out and started to make pattys, and pulled a frying pan out of the cupboard, "you want one?" he asked Omi Omi nodded with a smile and said "sure! in fact here, ill help" she stood up just as screames were heard coming from outside, they looked at eachother and ran to the window. seeing what was happening J.T s eyes went wide as he exclamed "what the he** is that?"
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 31, 2007 13:51:35 GMT -5
Oooooooooooo!
More story! Yay!
This format is a bit easier to read.
I wonder what's going on?
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Post by tabiris on Oct 31, 2007 20:30:05 GMT -5
yippy skippy i smell plot twist
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Oct 31, 2007 20:32:40 GMT -5
Nice Tabby. Nice. XD
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Post by volkodlakmojster on Oct 31, 2007 20:36:56 GMT -5
okay, im at a loss as to what is out there.... pm me with ideas?
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 31, 2007 20:45:17 GMT -5
....
*got nothin*
Take a break and something will come! ^^
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Post by NightWing on Nov 1, 2007 8:15:22 GMT -5
See, what's out there is what I'm waiting to find out. If I give you the idea, that takes the fun out of it xD
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Post by ogrefairy on Nov 1, 2007 14:11:50 GMT -5
Exactically!
(intentional misspelling)
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Post by Wolfy on Nov 1, 2007 16:36:04 GMT -5
More. *sits*
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