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Post by ogrefairy on Aug 19, 2008 10:20:18 GMT -5
Huh... this is one I'm still figuring out. ^^
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Post by tabiris on Aug 19, 2008 10:23:38 GMT -5
 This is who Mephistopheles is. |
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Post by NightWing on Aug 19, 2008 22:12:34 GMT -5
Holy crap  Well, I guessed right, but those are some serious appearance variations. |
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Post by tabiris on Aug 19, 2008 22:13:10 GMT -5
ah it gets better
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Post by tabiris on Aug 20, 2008 20:15:00 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 4: Protagonizing the situation[/glow]
(Okay your just making up words now for your puns.)
(It doesn’t make them any less punderful.)
(-foreheadslap- Why doe I even bother with you?)
(Cause I created you.)
(Right.)
“Quixoto, has there been any change? We’re on the loosing end as always aren’t we?” Quixoto was in a great marble hall formerly King Samrick’s throne room. Before him in a far smaller throne to the original sat what appeared to be the antithesis of Mephistopheles.
“Of course. What would make you think otherwise Charby?” Quixoto sighed,
“Wishful thinking I guess. Without Oswego I can’t battle Mephistopheles on equal ground. It’s been almost a month since Tony infiltrated the Electric Castle.” Charby sighed getting up. Just shorter than Q he leaned against the arm of his throne.
“Charby be careful. The last thing we need is you to keel over.” Quixoto handed Charby a cane to lean on.
“Well then it’d be your job to take care of everyone Devil Eyes.” Charby leaned on the cane.
“Heh, You’re the only one who calls me that still. I wonder what it would have been like to be your sire.” Quixoto laughed.
“Indeed, Adria was less than desirable sire.” Charby laughed softly stopping in a fit of coughs. “Better fetch Hexavia.”
Q rushed off after setting Charby back in his throne.
(You enjoy corrupting things don’t you?)
(Corrupting what? I haven’t corrupted anything.)
(Sure. Whatever.)
(Grrr… anyways until next time folks Ja Ne)
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Post by tabiris on Aug 20, 2008 20:17:20 GMT -5
 and here's our Charby for this story both of these pictures can be viewed on amelius deviantart gallery as well username Amelius |
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Post by ogrefairy on Aug 20, 2008 20:24:13 GMT -5
So this is interesting. It's like a totally different reality. I kind of got that before but I was very cunfuzzled. I think I am understanding how you write now. ^^
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Post by tabiris on Aug 20, 2008 20:24:47 GMT -5
how i write?
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Post by ogrefairy on Aug 20, 2008 20:29:50 GMT -5
Yes. ^^ As you may recall, for a while I was confuzzed and not really understanding what you were writing. I think my brain is fixed now because I have been understanding lately. XP Either that or you are becoming a better writing. XP
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Post by tabiris on Aug 20, 2008 20:31:12 GMT -5
i see
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Post by NightWing on Aug 20, 2008 20:51:09 GMT -5
I think he's just tying things together now instead of staying all cryptic and stuff, but it could just be me xD
In any case, very cool plot you've got going here, as per usual
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Post by tabiris on Aug 20, 2008 21:01:12 GMT -5
this isn't my evil cryptic story. this one has very few loose ends it's other stories that get loose ends from meh -evil laugh- or is it that i'm being so cryptic that you're tying the wrong loose ends together?
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Post by NightWing on Aug 20, 2008 21:09:23 GMT -5
Who knows. But the beginning of this one was highly confusing.
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Post by tabiris on Aug 20, 2008 21:11:05 GMT -5
good it was supposed to be
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Post by NightWing on Aug 20, 2008 21:39:14 GMT -5
Well there you go then xD
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Post by tabiris on Aug 22, 2008 0:06:09 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 5: Informational Informaty[/glow]
(Ok so we have a large amount of pieces shown on the board now.)
(Large? We know 3 good guys and 4 bad guys and had another good guy that was briefly mentioned.)
(Well I don’t want the extreme changes to explode their heads.)
(You’re making this up as you go.)
(Am not! I give everything a good five minutes of basic thought then play with advanced things for at least another 25 minutes before I determine the characters worthiness.)
(Just start the chapter.)
(I should have had Zerachiel Co-host.)
“Charby you really need to rest more. Without the staff-“
“I know Hexavia. But I feel so darn useless cooped up in here sitting on this throne like I actually deserve it.” Charby was with a woman. She was diminutive in stature. She wore a purple sweater with no cloth over the shoulder line, a black knee length skirt with a zigzag bottom, and knee length black leather boots. Around her neck was a choker with a skull pendant. She was mixing potions for Charby.
“Just bear with it a little longer lest we hear another Bunny rant.”
“Indeed. She still misses Zerlocke eh?”
“As much as I missed Tony at first.”
“What did you see in Tony anyways? He was always an arrogant prick and never treated you right.”
“I know but he had this soft side about him when we got together. Though lately I can’t help as though I was just his pawn to get over Bunny.”
“I think many of us felt similar. It was also a reason why I sent him to spy in the castle. Though speaking of missing ones I wonder what became of Zeno and Kavonn.”
“Ever since the appearance of that king guy appeared who knows. He may have killed the in the preemptive battle.”
“It’s possible as he was able to amass quite a fine combat battalion very easily.”
“Honestly, you’ll complement anyone wont you?”
“Someone has to Hexavia.”
“Well we’re all done here get some rest now.”
(It’s all chatter.)
(Hey! There’s a bit of action in an early paragraph.)
(Hexavia’s description. Yawn.)
(Well there may have been a few gestures and sighs floating around there but it’s boring to continuously us them.)
(Lazy.)
(And proud of it. Until next time, Ja Ne!)
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Post by NightWing on Aug 22, 2008 0:35:53 GMT -5
Ah, exposition. It's necessary =P
A little more insight into this alternative world...
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Post by ogrefairy on Aug 22, 2008 23:24:27 GMT -5
Wow. This is all so interesting. XP I still don't know where this is going but I like it. ^^
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Post by tabiris on Aug 24, 2008 0:43:12 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 6: The Devils Dealings[/glow]
“Ok then my loyal lords; well, mostly loyal at least. It’s time to draw the rats from their nest.”
A meeting in the throne room, a rare occurrence even for the lords of the land; Very few were aloud in this room where their liege lord rested.
“Arise my lords. For the first matter of business, Sorcerer, claim your staff that you might be whole again.” The King waved his hand idly as Kavonn rose and took his staff from a display cabinet nearby. “Our enemies surrogate leader, Charby, has a similar issue to our own Sorcerer. Our Warrior has taken his Oswego from him.”
“Fascinating but what does this have to do with catching the resistance.” Kavonn returned to his place clutching his staff.
“We will return Oswego to the rat king. In doing so we can trace it to the nest.” The king laughed softly. “We will use Tony as the messenger boy. Yes Executioner I know that you’ve been keeping him down in the dungeon.
“I guess I’m the one that will be tracking the staff on it’s descent into the nest and then,” Mephistopheles licked one of his index claws, “I’ll purge the rats from it.”
“Yes. Though I wish to give them ten minutes to see how they will react to this. They have a few diverging paths to take and I’m curious in which it will be. If they run then we lose nothing and on that small chance they fight they will be purged.” King slammed his fist on the arm of the throne to drive his point home.
“But if they run we lose a hostage and a powerful artifact.” Zeno shifted uncomfortably.
“Oh please after all these months you’ve got nothing out of Tony. As for the artifact, who cares? Only I can utilize it’s power and I don’t need it. What’s Charby going to do? Try calling on its powers again. Last time he did he made me what I am and then I killed that woman Adria for siring us. Not that that fool would ever utilize such a weakness.” Mephistopheles wrapped a clawed hand around Zeno’s neck. “Or perhaps you wanted Tony ‘s information for more than just our holy crusade. The only truth is this world is that when there is evil only a greater evil can kill it as justice will fall to the revenges of time.”
“I feel that Bunny’s location could be extracted from Tony with significant persuasion.” Zeno gripped his axe tightly.
“If so then she will be where he goes. You know that he loved my queen as you were once our fellow rival for her.” King laughed loudly.
“If you remember my king it was always Hexavia I preferred.” Zeno looked at Mephistopheles. “Are you going to remove your hand anytime soon?”
“He stole Hexavia from you too if I recall correctly. Tony was always in the way. He’s your perceived evil and you wish for his slow death correct?” Mephistopheles removed his hand slowly.
“I do intend to silence his life soon.” Zeno chuckled looking at Kavonn.
“And you will have that chance whether they run or not.” The King got up shifting his black armor a bit after the uncomfortable seat. “Meeting adjourned.”
(Aren’t we supposed to run banter before and after the chapters?)
(Couldn’t think of anything to talk about.)
(Never stopped you before.)
(Yeah but I need some serious banter every once and a while.)
(But this is supposed to be joke banter.)
(Anyways until next time Ja Ne)
(You escaped my point.)
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Post by ogrefairy on Aug 24, 2008 6:52:48 GMT -5
Hmmm... interesting. Mephistopheles is just a little bit scary and Zeno isn't helping things. XP Very cool. ^^
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Post by NightWing on Aug 24, 2008 7:53:33 GMT -5
Well then..... dang. Guess we'll see how far they get with this plan
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Post by tabiris on Jan 10, 2009 5:29:00 GMT -5
We Will indeed. Im finally getting back to this story. The poor things been neglected for so long.
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Post by NightWing on Jan 10, 2009 6:20:02 GMT -5
Awesome. Looking forward to updates then
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Post by tabiris on Jan 15, 2009 6:56:13 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 7: Returning to Undeath[/glow]
(and we're back unfortunately my assistant is researching her
role in other stories right now so no word from her today. roll it.)
A young redheaded girl wandered through the black forest after
a strange fellow she had seen not long ago after her escape
from that prison, that hellish nightmare of a dungeon.
She was alone and frightened but that man, he too had been a
prisoner and made a deal with the torturer. He was sent into the
black forests with a sickle staff. He must have known a way
though the charred remains of the war torn forest.
The girl had been a prisoner for so long. She was frail, small, scar
covered, and her clothes were naught but blood stained rags of
all shapes and colors taken from the corpses of other prisoners.
Crossing many a dried stream she managed to follow him to a
grand mountain line.
There was the entrance to an enormous cave. The tall man
entered and the girl made to follow hearing a cold voice behind
her that sent chills down her spine.
"Hello my dear you're looking fine."
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Post by ogrefairy on Jan 15, 2009 9:24:43 GMT -5
Ooooooooooooooo! Awesome you're writing again. ^^ This could get interesting... I really like this.
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Post by Odin on Jun 16, 2009 16:06:54 GMT -5
Chapter 8: Flug von die Toten
(Amy made a remark about someone not finishing fan-stories in her latest interview and I’m stuck on my original story so I figure I’ll get back to this one. Yes I am the original owner of this story some of you have my MSN and Google Talk addresses so contact me if you want)
Tony climbed the stairs to the remains of Samrick’s castle dragging Oswego behind him with a sigh. All that time and his efforts felt fruitless. He wasn’t even sure if he would be well received for arriving home with nothing but a staff that was forced upon him. He was even sure he was being followed but he had nowhere else to go.
“Tony?” Quixoto appeared at the castle door gave Tony a quick once over, mentally and physically, then dragged him into the palace with all due haste.
“Charby! Tony’s here with Oswego but I suspect that he was followed out of the castle.” Quixoto brought Tony before Charby and rushed off to collect everyone else in the palace.
“Tony!” Charby attempted to get up and fell over off the throne.
“Charby I’s guess youse needs dis.” Tony gave Charby the staff of Oswego.
Upon taking Oswego from Tony Charby got up and stretched he seemed a lot more focused and ready to work. “Thank you Tony now with this we can fight back - one day - for now we must retreat. As soon as Q returns with the others.”
“Charby we’re here and we found this girl wandering around just outside of the palace.” Quixoto returned surrounded by a hodgepodge of people including, but not limited to, Hexavia, Bunny, Crispo, Daray, and the little redheaded girl.
“Good we’re all here now lets get out of here everyone join hands.” Everyone held hands in a large ring and vanished with a small pop.
Mephistopheles entered the palace throne room, a short time after the "Good" guys teleported away, looking around frustrated. “Prey got away. Oh well we have a spy now.”
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