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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 10, 2007 18:14:55 GMT -5
I know what you're thinking. "Holy crap, Zero's writing a fanfic?" Yeah, I'm a bit surprised myself. But I've had an idea in my head for a while, and today I'm feeling somewhat creative. Just a bit of backstory here, this involves my trademark character, Toki, from the RP section. This takes place after the Superhero thread, but... Actually, it'd be easier if I just did this. wolfchild9999.proboards99.com/index.cgi?board=fun&action=display&thread=1188496738&page=1It takes place after this. This in itself is an alternate storyline, so what happens here isn't consistent with Toki's overall story. Not that many of you care, but this is just for those who do. Anyway, away we go!
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 10, 2007 18:17:02 GMT -5
Ooooooooooooooooooo!
*Is intrigued*
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 10, 2007 18:20:59 GMT -5
Chapter 1, Part 1 ---------------------------------
Kellwood Forest was well known for being an unusual place, at least for those outside of it. For those within the giant wood, it was quite normal.
However, what was about to happen would be very unusual, even for those accustomed to the forest.
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The portal opened above the forest, shimmering and glowing. Toki stepped out of the portal.
"Well, that's gonna take some-"
It was after the portal closed that Toki realized that he wasn't on solid ground.
".....oh, not this-"
He began to fall.
"-AGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAINNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!"
Gravity was a harsh mistress, especially to Toki.
WHACK!
"Ow! Tree branch."
THUMP!
"Oh! Not....there...."
WHAP!
"GAH! ....oh God, not the rock!"
CRACK!
"GYYYYYYAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!"
Toki finally fell to the ground, rolling about clutching his nose and his.....nether regions....
"Owowowowowowowowowow!!!!!!!!!!!"
After a few minutes of whining, Toki began to heal his wounds. He then stood up and wiped the blood from his nose.
"Ugh......well, now where am I?"
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 10, 2007 18:23:19 GMT -5
Wow!
*giggle*
Nice intro!
*gets popcorn*
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 10, 2007 18:25:37 GMT -5
*bows* Thank you, thank you.
I'll wait for some more viewers before posting the next part.
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 10, 2007 18:26:30 GMT -5
Okay!
'Tis awesome so far!
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Post by NightWing on Oct 10, 2007 18:29:06 GMT -5
Waiting for more viewers? That's just cruel to the ones you already have. ;D
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 10, 2007 18:32:44 GMT -5
I can't help it. I'm one of those who has to know that people are reading my stuff. Otherwise I lose my motivation.
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Post by Wolfy on Oct 10, 2007 18:58:01 GMT -5
MORE. NOW.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Oct 10, 2007 19:00:09 GMT -5
YESH
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 10, 2007 19:07:48 GMT -5
WHOO! Now I'm motivated!
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Chapter 1, Part 2
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Toki wandered through the forest, wondering why he was there.
"Just once, when Shina drops me off in these places, I'd wish she'd tell me why!" he grumbled loudly.
A little too loudly, unfortunately.
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Atop a tree not far ahead, Zerlocke sat on a branch, doing what he usually did around this time.
"Oh, my dearest Mye. Why can't we be together?"
Yep. Moaning over Mye.
"Oh, my heart aches at the mere thought of us being apart. I'd give anything to end this pain!" he cried.
Just then, his eyes noticed a new form in the forest. An unusual form...
"Perhaps I can drown my sorrows in a snack..."
Zerlocke quietly and carefully swooped around, so as to take the newcomer by surprise.
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Toki sniffed the area. He was used to unfamiliar places, yet something seemed amiss...
"Something defintely ain't kosher here." he muttered to himself.
He could here movement in the trees, but it was very quiet. If he was an ordinary human, chances are he wouldn't hear it.
The movement suddenly became faster.
Toki flinched.
CRACK!
This was one of those times that Toki thanked his natural instincts.
A spinning heel connected with Zerlocke's face, sending teeth flying.
Zerlocke was sent flying back into a tree.
WHAM!
He slumped down, in a daze.
"...whoa. Didn't see that coming." Toki remarked.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Oct 10, 2007 19:24:17 GMT -5
lol, poor Zerlocke.
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 10, 2007 19:31:10 GMT -5
Last one for tonight, ladies and gents.
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Chapter 1, Part 3
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Claire wandered about the house, somewhat concerned.
"Rosemary, where's our brother?" she asked her sister.
"You know him. He's probably off sulking about his precious Mye. Honestly, when will he grow up?" Rosemary scoffed.
"Well, I'm going to go find him."
Rosemary blinked. "What? Why? He always comes back after a while."
"I know, but...something seems wrong....."
"Maybe you're just being paranoid."
Claire walked to the door. "I'm still going to look for him."
Rosemary sighed. "Wait. I'll go with you."
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Back in the forest, Toki had just gotten a good look at his attacker.
"Oh, just fine and dandy. A vampire. And an elite at that. This is my lucky day." he groaned, shivering slightly.
Zerlocke groaned and sat up. His jaw healed into place with a crack. He glared at Toki.
"Insolent whelp! How dare you hit me! Now I'll have to make your death slow!"
Toki blinked. "Whoa, whoa, hold on. Are you saying you wanted me to hold still and let you snack on me?"
Zerlocke stood up. "It would've been nice."
"Yeah, well I'm not in a nice mood. Now, I've got better things to do than deal with you. So, I'll be going now."
Toki then turned around and began to walk away.
Zerlocke fumed. "So, not only do you shatter my jaw, you have the nerve to leave before the fight is finished?! Now I'm REALLY angry!"
He charged at Toki head-first.
Toki sighed. "Fantastic."
Toki turned and charged toward Zerlocke.
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 10, 2007 19:34:50 GMT -5
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
*munches on more popcorn*
This is awesome!
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Post by NightWing on Oct 11, 2007 0:20:09 GMT -5
Combat with an elite.....Toki's got his hands full, and Rosemary and Claire are on their way to boot ;D
Very nice so far, waiting anxiously for more Zero.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Oct 11, 2007 6:34:52 GMT -5
*steals some popcorn* Gimme:D
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 11, 2007 6:47:37 GMT -5
OK, let the brawl begin!
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Chapter 2, Part 1
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Samrick looked outside from his chair.
"Huh, that's weird..." he commented to himself.
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Quixoto blinked. He looked around his dungeon area.
"What I wouldn't do for a window right about now..."
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"Huh?"
Charby stepped outside of the door and looked outside.
"Something's defintely wrong..." he muttered.
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WHAM!
Well, when I said they were charging head-first, I did mean that.
Both Zerlocke's and Toki's heads collided with each other.
They both fell back onto the ground.
"AGH! Why must you mortals have such hard heads?!" Zerlocke cried.
"You're a fine one to talk! I thought I'd hit a brick wall!" Toki replied.
Zerlocke growled and lunged for Toki.
Toki quickly put up his feet and kicked Zerlocke upwards.
Zerlocke rolled out of the kick and started flying.
"Oh, right. Vampires fly..." Toki muttered.
Zerlocke swooped down and punched Toki in the face.
Toki reeled back, shaking his head.
Zerlocke then flew forward, ready for the kill.
When suddenly, Toki vanished.
"What? How did he-"
WHAM!
Toki's foot suddenly caught Zerlocke's head from behind, sending him crashing into a tree.
Toki wiped his face. "You done goofing around, bat-boy?"
Zerlocke was very vexed. "GGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!"
He flew towards Toki again.
"I guess so..." Toki muttered.
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 11, 2007 13:44:40 GMT -5
Oooooooooooooooooooooo!
*giggle*
This is awesome! ^^
To Angel: Give me mine popcorn back!
*steals it back and eats some*
HA!
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 11, 2007 14:10:11 GMT -5
Chapter 2, Part 2
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ZING!
Just as Zerlocke lunged for Toki, he vanished again.
"$!#$! How does he keep doing that?!" he cursed.
Atop a tree not far away, Toki assessed the situation.
Hmm....I could wrestle him to the ground, but I'd have to stay away from his neck and arms. He could easily bite me there. If anything, his legs would work, but he could reach... he thought.
I could just stick to quick strikes, but I can't evade him for long...
"FOUND YOU!"
Zerlocke flew towards Toki.
"Oh, not again!" Toki cried.
WHAM!
Zerlocke tackled Toki and flew upwards with him.
"Ha! Finally got you!" Zerlocke crowed.
"Oh, is that what you think?" Toki asked.
THWACK!
Toki quickly got his arms out, then slammed both of his fists on Zerlocke's ears.
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" Zerlocke cried in pain.
This caused him to let go of Toki.
"Hah! Now what.......oh, wait."
Toki then fell to the ground....again.
"Gravity, I hate you."
Zerlocke quickly zipped under Toki, then stuck out a leg.
"Oh, you son of a-"
WHAM!
Zerlocke's leg hit Toki's.....spot-between-the-legs as he landed.
"Ohhhhh.........."
Toki slumped to the ground in tremendous pain.
Zerlocke jumped around, victorious.
"Haha! How do you like that, you arrogant fool?!"
He then lunged for the kill.
"Ohh.....now you're gonna get it!"
BAM!
Zerlocke happened to land gut-first on Toki's elbow.
Toki then grabbed Zerlocke and placed him chest-first on his shoulders.
"Now it's my turn to be angry!"
He started spinning around, steadily increasing his speed until he whipped up a minature tornado.
"Whoawhoawhoawhoawhoa!" Zerlocke shouted, becoming disoriented.
"We're just getting started, pal!" Toki retorted.
He then tossed Zerlocke, letting him be sucked up by the tornado and flying around.
"I'm not finished yet!" Toki yelled.
Toki then leapt in and out of the tornado, hitting Zerlocke each time he passed.
Then, while inside it, he grabbed Zerlocke by the throat, and slammed him into the ground, dispelling the whirlwind.
WHAM!
"Rrrrrrrrrgggggggghhhhhhh!!!!!!!" Toki growled.
He then tossed Zerlocke upwards, then charged after him.
BAM!
Toki's head connected with Zerlocke's head in mid-air.
They both fell to the ground, bruised pretty badly.
"Heh.....heh......hope you learned your lesson, blood-drinker." Toki gasped.
Zerlocke then staggered to his feet.
".....great. Just great." Toki groaned.
"I'M. NOT. DONE. YET!" Zerlocke yelled.
He then pulled out a giant, two-bladed axe.
Toki responded by pulling out his scythe.
"I hate it when the enemy doesn't quit when down." he muttered.
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 11, 2007 14:14:57 GMT -5
Wow Zero your really good at these action scenes!
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Post by NightWing on Oct 11, 2007 14:35:35 GMT -5
Popcorn is over-rated *grabs Doritos* Keep it coming Zero ;D
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Post by Wolfy on Oct 11, 2007 14:36:01 GMT -5
moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore.
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 11, 2007 14:36:43 GMT -5
<.< >.>
*steals one of Night's Doritos*
Yes indeedy Zero! You have hooked readers now! ^^
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Oct 11, 2007 15:45:58 GMT -5
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 11, 2007 16:41:46 GMT -5
Dingdingding! Time for Round 2!
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Chapter 2, Part 3
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Toki zipped forward and grabbed Zerlocke's axe before he attacked.
"Huh......this is an interesting weapon..."
Zerlocke blinked. "Hey! Give that back!"
"Would you relax?.....hey, what's this writing here?"
"Oh that. It says "Dinora, Inathe..."
Toki tossed the axe to Zerlocke.
It fell into his hands as he finished his sentence. "...Aidien......uh-oh."
KRZAP!!!
"WHOA! What-.....oooh, that is not a pretty sight..." Toki commented.
Zerlocke had changed. His hair had turned white, and his eyes blue. He seemed more....maniacal.
"Oooooh.....mortal, you have no idea what you've done!"
Suddenly, he was gone.
"What? How did-"
CHING!
Toki just barely managed to block a swing from behind.
He's as fast as I am! Toki realized.
Zerlocke started swinging at Toki with insane frenzy. Toki was just barely able to block them.
No, he's even faster! And he's not even getting tired.....I'm in it deep!
CLANG!
Toki's scythe flew out of his hands into the forest.
"NO!"
"Hahahaha! Got you now!"
Zerlocke swung the axe at Toki's skull.
WHAP!
Toki managed to catch the blade in his hands.
Zzzt. Zzzt.
Small amounts of magical energy crackled around the axe. Toki was slowly being pushed down.
Zerlocke grinned insanely. "Just give up! It's pointless to struggle!"
For a brief second, Toki saw something familiar in Zerlocke's eyes.
He looked like Ubel.
".....get away from me......"
"What? What'd you say?"
Toki snapped.
"I SAID GET AWAY FROM ME!!!!"
FWOOM!
White flames shot out of Toki's body, sending Zerlocke flying.
WHAM!
Once again, he collided with a tree, this time knocking him out. His hair resumed its normal colour, the axe having been knocked away in the blast.
Toki breathed heavily. He moved forward.
"I THINK I FOUND HIM!"
Toki froze. Someone else was coming. Someone who knew Zerlocke?
He didn't wait to find out. He grabbed his scythe and ran off.
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 11, 2007 16:44:57 GMT -5
Wow!
This is wonderful!
*munches more*
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 13, 2007 15:54:20 GMT -5
Chapter 3, Part 1
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"I'LL KILL THE BRAT! SO HELP ME I'LL SLAUGHTER HIM!"
If you could tell that that was Zerlocke, then you've been paying attention.
He was back at his house with Claire and Rosemary. Healed, well, and very angry.
Rosemary sighed. "You're getting bent out to shape because of some random person."
Zerlocke fumed. "No mortal could fight me off! Especially not when I was transformed! He'll suffer greatly for this!"
Claire blinked. "Zerlocke, the chances of you running into him again are fairly slim. You shouldn't be so-"
"He actually beat me! Me!"
Rosemary grinned. "You're just cranky because he prevented you from taking out your sorrow over Mye."
Zerlocke stopped. He stood there for a good five minutes, not saying a word.
Claire leaned forward. "Brother...?"
Zerlocke promptly turned around and walked away. "I'll be in my room."
Claire sighed. "Of course..."
"But if I see him again, I'LL KILL HIM!"
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"ACHOO!"
Meanwhile, not too far away...
"Great...he's still kicking. And talking about me too." Toki grumbled.
He had stopped under a tree to rest a bit after the fight. Despite it being somewhat short, it did take a bit out of him.
"I wonder what the deal was with that axe..." he muttered.
He began healing his wounds. Luckily, they weren't that serious. Just painful.
He sighed as he looked at the sky.
"Why am I here, anyway?" he asked no one in particular.
"I could ask the same thing."
Toki turned around abruptly to find King Samrick, in his small form.
"And just who are you?" Toki asked.
"Isn't it proper manners to introduce yourself before asking other people's names?" Samrick replied.
Toki sighed. "Fine. My name's Toki. Now who are you?"
Samrick grinned. "The name's Samrick, king of Kellwood Forest."
"Well, if you don't mind my saying so, you don't look like a king." Toki remarked.
POOF!
Samrick, now five times his previous size, looked down at Toki. "Do I look like a king now?"
When Toki spoke, it was in a small voice. "Yep."
Samrick then grabbed Toki and lifted him up to his height.
"We need to talk."
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Post by {×ÏÑk§tÊ®88×} on Oct 13, 2007 17:03:02 GMT -5
oooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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Post by ogrefairy on Oct 13, 2007 17:10:05 GMT -5
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Indeed!
Very interesting!
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Post by ZeroVX on Oct 16, 2007 15:48:17 GMT -5
Chapter 3, Part 2
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Toki gulped. Contrary to what some would believe, he wasn't that comfortable around heights.
"Wh...what about, your highness?"
Samrick sat down, which, in his giant form, was still a long way up.
"For starters, why are you here?"
"Well, that's something I was wondering myself."
Samrick blinked. "What, you just fell out of the sky?"
Toki grinned weakly. "Exactly right."
Samrick sighed. "OK....."
"This happens quite a bit to me."
"So, you showed up here, with no knowledge of why you came here?"
"Well, there must be some reason. There always is when I'm just dropped off like this."
"I see..."
Samrick looked around, surveying the area.
"OK. Why did you get into a scrap with one of my agents?"
Toki blinked. "You mean the vampire?"
"Long black hair, red eyes. Looks like a puppy that's been kicked too many times."
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"ACHOO!"
Zerlocke let out a loud sneeze from his room.
"He's bragging about beating me! I know it!"
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Toki nodded. "Well, I don't know about the puppy part, but he does fit the description."
Samrick raised an eyebrow. "So why'd you fight him?"
"Hey, he started it! I was just minding my own business, then he swoops over and attacks me!"
"Huh. Must've been in a bad mood."
"That figures."
Samrick thought for a minute.
"Can you at least venture a guess as to why you're here?"
Toki looked upwards as he thought.
"Well, usually I have to search for something. A person or item of great importance."
He then looked back at Samrick.
"Worst case scenario is that I have to pound the snot out of some punk who screwed up and angered the gods."
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"ACHOO!"
"Bless you, Zeno."
"Thanks, Mye."
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DUN DUN DUN!
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