Rise of the Guardian

[volkodlakmojster]

Hey guys, guess whut? Im writing a book!, however, i need some feedback and tips. Im up to the 6th chapter, and I have no clue if its any good.
Any one interested in giving it a read, please do so, and let me know what you think. My plan is to post a chapter at a time online, and if i get a following Ill illustrate it and make an ebook out of it to sell to those who dont want to wait for the next chapter.
The story is centered around ancient myths and legends being based on true events,though exaggerated and changed to make them teach a lesson. however, the source of earths magic was sealed to prevent a war between "empowered" and "mundane" beings. the story takes place in modern times, and focuses on Nichole Kurios, the woman destined to guard the source when it began to fail 20 years ago, and her adventures in dealing with newly discovered powers, and duties, helped along by her friends.

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[lilac]

First of all, you misspelled my name.

Second, I'd love to give your book a read, though you're probably loads smarter than I am. But I'll be happy to help if I can.

[volkodlakmojster]

misspelled your name? huh?

[Amelius]

Tehee, Lilac's name is Nicole

[volkodlakmojster]

ahh, well my character started spelled like that, but a typo made me change it because i liked it better the towns name was another deal like that