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Post by Odin on Sept 23, 2010 5:46:12 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Prologue:[/glow]
A young girl stood at the edge of the New York harbor. The winter winds danced along the docks making her long, black hair dance oh so slightly. The females outfit consisted of black slacks, a white wool button up shirt covered by a matte black overcoat, and a simple black fur ushanka hat. Though she was only nine in appearance, the girls silvery eyes told a very different story one the topic her age, one of countless years of aggression and misery. Her pointed ears and ash-like grey skin pointed out very clearly she wasn’t human. She turned back to a boy that was approaching her position. “Good morning, Tony.”
“Goods mornings, toots.” Much like the girl, Tony was several times older than she appeared and his story was just as sad, his blue eyes spoke of betrayal and the loss of many friends. He ran a hand through his short, black hair; tapping his black bowler as he passed it. Two lengths of hair just in front of his ears drooped down to his chin before defying all of Sir Isaac Newton’s laws of gravity by jutting forward at a ninety degree angle then, just past his face, jutting up to the tip of his brow; from the perspective of someone far away he could be thought of as a boy wearing two particularly fuzzy hooks in his hair for some bizarre reason. He wore a basic black suit much as was popular in this day and age of the 1920’s.
“Tony, I think today is going to be my last day.” The girl looked Tony in the eye for a minute before tossing him an envelope, running past him as he fumbled to catch it. “Aufwiedersehen!”
Before Tony could give chase the girl entered the nearby warehouse, his home for the past couple of years, and slammed the door shut; the all too obvious sound of the lock sliding into place sang into the morning mist.
Tony glanced at the envelope; the words “Open me after the bang” rested on the center of the envelope. Tony started to ask aloud “Vat ‘bangs’?”, however, before he could get the words out a tremendous explosion erupted from the warehouse; white hot flames licking at the bricks as the structure crumbled into a pile of rubble.
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Post by Odin on Sept 23, 2010 5:51:18 GMT -5
This is up elsewhere but to encourage myself to put more into it I'm positing it here too.
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Post by Odin on Sept 26, 2010 5:10:10 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 1: Christine[/glow]
“Ugh. That dream again. Eighty years and I still… ugh.”
There are few in Kellwood whom can claim to lead a life of luxury, fewer still whom are of a magical persuasion. Christine Unterwald is one such of the privileged individuals that may say she lives in the lap of luxury, at least as far as property goes.
Christine has always been a mystery to Kellwood and, at one time, a source of much gossip. Christine officially arrived nearly fifty years ago and in all that time she has only been witnessed a handful of times. Since the last sighting, thirty-five years ago, it has been assumed that Christine lives with a daughter for between sightings she hasn’t really changed all that much, well at all really but the memories of humans are fuzzy at best.
Christine’s race, the alp (mara in her case as she is female), is blessed with longevity; she herself is well over seven hundred. Alps vary in appearance from elegant elfling like children like Christine to little goblinoids. The elfling like alps have varying colors of skin based on their preference but appear to default to shades of gray; Christine favored a silver grey shade of skin. Christine’s left eye was a lovely shade of battleship grey with a serpentine pupil. The right eye Christine keeps hidden from view under the pretext to stare into her right eye is to stare into the depths of madness and never return.
The mara’s expensive tastes were easy to distinguish from the black silk that made up the sheets and curtains and the mahogany wood frame furniture (a theme shared by every piece of furniture in the house). To top it off everything in the house was hand made and special ordered, even her clothes.
Christine arose from her elegant king size, four poster bed and pushed the curtains to the side. Her outfit at the moment, aka her nightwear, consisted of a white tank to and boxers which usually had creative patterns on them as well as a silver armlet. The groggy creature shuffled over to her closet, procuring a fine suit and eye patch, both made from silk. After a quick shuffle the attire was on and the girl could really rock the suit despite being as tall as your average ten year old. Now awake however she used her magic to make herself about 5'6" tall.
The girl crossed the room to a small dresser with a massive vanity mirror swiping up a brush and putting it to work in her hair. A quick glance at the nearby digital clock told her it was 5:44 PM; seeing this the mara quietly put her brush down and proceeded to bolt out the bedroom door and down the stairs snatching a leather jacket and chaps on the way. Once downstairs she made for a small side room leading to her garage.
Within the garage, two of Christine’s pride and joys rested: A 1926 Model 630 K Mercedes Benz, and a 2007 BMW K1200GT Motorcycle (a recent acquisition to replace her older bike when its top speed became obsolete).
Once the leather was one Christine straddled her motorcycle and started it up. Real quickly before shooting out the garage door she removed her silver bracelet and with a flick it was a shiny black full motorcycle helm. Once fully prepared she blasted out of the garage onto the streets of Kellwood, She turned for the forest and darted into its depths.
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Post by Odin on Sept 26, 2010 5:11:38 GMT -5
Cant say I really like this chapter since it does little for the story other than establish Christine's appearance and her expensive tastes, oh well it's nessessary.
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Post by Odin on Oct 10, 2010 5:19:48 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 2: Bureau[/glow]
The Bureau, a wondrous multidimensional organization with very little purpose to the outsider; most of the bureau’s activities seem to be along the lines of providing hired spies and otherwise information gathering jobs. There are other things done of course but what they are even many of the members do not know.
Speaking of ignorant employees, we now turn our attentions to one Alejandro Bloom, the new halfling gatekeeper. It is now 6:57 PM as the halfling reaches to shut the gate for the morning shift only to have his hand slapped by his supervisor, Salvatore Diamond-splitter, dwarf.
“What’re you doing rookie? The door don’t close till seven and it ain’t seven yet.” Despite his height Salvatore’s axe, which he was waving around at the moment, made him a really scary individual when he was talking down on people.
“But sir the door takes two minutes to close and the only one not here is an alp.” The halfling slipped back from his superior, even a glancing blow from that axe could prove fatal for the fragile gatekeeper.
“That alp would flay your hide if you locked her outta here. Trust me I, and anyone else here would let her too. One rookie ain’t worth losing your life to that wily woman’s sword and claws. Heck you might get lucky and she’ll just give you a nice little peak under that eye patch she wears; last guy what she showed still works here as a test subject for mental restoring medicine, no progress yet but we’re hopeful.”
Now fearing for his life and/or sanity, the halfling stepped back from the button like it had the plague out into the open part of the foyer. This was a mistake as the roaring of an overpowered motorcycle filled the foyer as Christine’s shot through the front doors hammering the halfling across the expanse of the sterile white room leaving a nice red trail to mark where he had started to the place he stopped.
Dismounting Christine removed her helmet and observed the scene. “Oops. Is he going to be alright?”
“Not ter worry miss, not ter worry. We’ll have him good as new by lunch. As usual, you’re right on time.” The dwarf hit the door shut switch and walked at a jaunty yet relaxed pace to check his ward’s health. “Right as rain he is. Just shell shocked and missing part of his face. He’ll be fine.”
“Good. If you’ll excuse me Sal I must locate Flannigan. He hasn’t been getting me my reports like he should.” Christine locked the steering on her motorcycle and continued for the inner sanctums of the bureau.
“Absolutely, Miss Unterwald.” The dwarf picked his protégé up and dragged him down a separate hall.
Down in the Alp Division of the Bureau One could always see people staring at Christine. It was not to hard to understand why really, she was unsociable, quick tempered, and the head of the division; though she never gave any orders directly always though Flannigan and his almost equally appalling social skills. Once she arrived on the scene the void of silence overtook any conversation that had been taking place.
By all accounts she was a glorified paper pusher with a private office and nearly quadruple salary. She only left her office for coffee breaks and was only seen holding conversation with Flannigan, well I say conversation but it was more like handing him a stack of folders and telling him to distribute them to those who looked like they needed work.
Today was no different, arriving as late as possible a chat with Flannigan and taking a mug of hot milk tea into her office without even glancing at anyone else. How she became head of the department was considered a small miracle but she was supposedly partners with one of the Bureau’s finest when she was a regular employee and that had sped things up for her career. Once the door to her office closed the conversations began anew with some dirty remarks regarding the department head mixed in.
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Post by Odin on Oct 10, 2010 6:44:24 GMT -5
Now I forget some things but if I remember correctly the bureau is a multidimensional group. cant remember what they do cause mostly it's not been explained (and isn't on the wiki which needs to be spellchecked no offense Amy)
I kinda made up some stuff regarding the group as well I would guess for the actual story Flannigan is the pseudo department head or something like that.
Also I made up the rules regarding the door and such. I also went back and changed all the AM's to PM's seeing as Alps are nocturnal creatures.
and yes Christine did just park her motorcycle right in the center of the foyer which is also made up.
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Post by Odin on Jan 27, 2011 20:10:38 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 3: Cold Blooded Cat[/glow]
In the 1910's a conversation was once held by a magical creature and a mob boss. The conversation set into motion a spiral that threatened the peace of New York's families. This is that conversation.
"I'm have a favor to ask of you. I should never be asking a woman this but you're the only one, the only one that I can think of to do this. I need a man to disappear. This man does not respect family. He burns our businesses and kills our…"
"Hush Don Pacino. I understand. How do you want it done?"
"How? However you see fit."
"Understood. Don Pacino I am going to leave you now as I am sure you are very busy."
In the hours following the conversation a tall woman in an unseemly suit, really a woman in public in mans clothes, strode across the lamp lit streets of the Brooklyn district. Her long, ebony hair flitted carelessly in the breezes coming of the coastline.
Her suit was a simple black one. Her dress shirt was white with the top three buttons undone. It was nicely complemented by a black fedora. Only her left eye was visible, the other covered by a cloth eye-patch, silver in color; it gave a distinctly feral feeling off
Sighting a mick cop she ducked into an alleyway letting him pass. Emerging the woman was now more masculine looking with far shorter hair. Stopping at a pub just off the pier she waited outside priming her weapon, a Browning FN Model 1910.
A drunkard was thrown out of the pub not long after her arrival. He made several rude gestures towards the establishment before hobbling off towards the pier.
The woman slid up behind the drunkard just as he reached the edge of the pier and put the gun up to his head. She said a name, getting the reaction she wanted she pulled the trigger.
BANG!
Christine jerked awake as a pile of paperwork was dropped on her desk. Looking around frantically she noted Flannigan in front of her. Before she could say anything he left the office slamming the door behind him.
"What's eating him?" Christine rolled her eye and started on the paper work basic stuff. She went over it three times unable to shake the feeling something was wrong with the paperwork then she realized what it was; something that would make Flannigan angry because his pay would be docked from it. Restin her head on her desk once again she screamed loud enough for anyone near her office to hear her. "Yiska! You skipped out on your reports again!"
Now she was going to have to go fetch them in person, a dangerous move for such a sensitive mission. Then there was Flannigan. Well a good brew at the bar would be enough to calm him down to reassure his pay would be fine.
With a sigh she bemoaned on her situation. "Life was easier when I just killed offenders. Now the offenders are my subordinates. Stupid management position."
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Post by Odin on Jan 27, 2011 20:10:57 GMT -5
This chapter is kind of random a little off base and just plain strange. I like it.
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Post by Odin on Jan 27, 2011 20:16:21 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 4: Tender Moments[/glow]
Christine emerged from her office looking from side to side calmly as she moved across the room; clutching two folders, one thick and one thin, to her chest delicately. A handful of the alps nearby glanced at Christine with various looks of disgust, dislike, or downright hatred for which she simply rolled her eye in response. Christine paused only at the sound of Flannigan yelling about something or another god knew what seeing how his words meshed together when he got angry enough.
Christine walked up to Flannigan waiting behind him patiently as he finished his rant about clean shoes or something to a slightly annoyed Gerwulf. Deciding quickly that he was taking too long Christine slapped Flannigan on the back of the head and shooed Gerwulf off.
"WHAT?!" Flannigan rounded Christine ears drooping down quickly when he identified his assailant.
"Flannigan, here's the reports I looked over and here's some assignments for the others. Where is Yiska currently stationed? I'll have to fetch her report myself, it seems." Christine handed the thick folder to Flannigan.
"She's taking on Mr. high-and-mighty Kavonn's task." Flannigan reached out for the folder with a scowl on his face.
"Ah, say no more. Hopefully she didn't send the notice by bird again. Those familiars of hers don't need to be carrying sensitive information around. This of course means they are going to be her method so I'll definitely need to go there tomorrow anyways." Christine frowned a little scratching her head in deep thought. For some reason she remembered Tonius at hearing Kavonn. Odd seeing as she met them several years apart from each other.
"Quite so. Are you going to give me the other folder so I can resume work sometime today?" Flannigan reached out for the thin folder Christine was carrying.
"Oh this isn't for you. It's my leave request approval. The day after tomorrow you're in charge of the division for a week or so. I know how much you love paperwork." Christine turned and walked back towards her office leaving a much bewildered Flannigan to try and figure out why the workaholic, who'd come in on her days off, was taking leave.
Later in the night as the first rays of sunshine began to peak over the horizon Christine was at home getting ready to settle into bed when she hear the most peculiar peck at her window. Rolling her eyes, for she did not have her eye patch on when she was at home, she wrenched the window open grasping the familiar that she knew to be Yiska's.
"Your mistress is getting a very stern possibly threatening warning about using you for black tape situations. No offense but you aren't subtle. Out you go now." Christine took the familiar's report and stroked it's skull before unceremoniously tossing it out the window closing the window with a slam.
"One last report before tomorrow. Gah, what am I going to do for a week? Stupid psychoanalysts." Christine opened the report and glanced down the documentation with half lidded eyes here eyes flicked once or twice at the mention of an alp and his love interests, it must have been the name Tony, she knew no Tony's but she did know Tonius and this Tony sounded similar, at least in appearance.
Christine sighed tossing the report on her desk. "Great now for another nightmare. The irony."
Christine crawled into her bed and closed her eyes to the waking world. Slumber took her into dreams of war and pestilence then to a very specific dream of recent years.
There was a bar, old fashioned with a piano and microphone sitting on stage, tables and chairs were aplenty but no bar stools to speak off. Everyone wore their Sunday best and was discussing the latest news.
"Rocco, Sally, you two are with me today." A young man with long black hair in a suit waved two significantly older men over to him. "Rocco you drive."
"Sure things Thomas." Rocco, a large Italian immigrant responded to the you man with a hearty wave dragging a lanky little man behind him.
The scene melted away reforming with the trio in a warehouse, there was some blood on the floor but no body. The three men were clearing away the blood with animated chatter about Thomas's supposed one man army skill at taking over places for a family.
Thomas waved the men off before checking a square steel door that led to the warehouses basement. Down in the basement he saw a young alp with short black hair, yet long sideburns, and blue eyes.
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Post by Odin on Jan 27, 2011 20:22:16 GMT -5
It's not the best work I've done but there was nothing left to do at the bureau and I didn't want a super revealing dream sequence.
if you all remember that image I commissioned Amy for, turns out it was canon to this fanfic.
Kudos for anyone that gets the double entendre of the chapter title
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Post by Odin on Feb 10, 2011 23:42:31 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 5: Once Upon a Time[/glow]
Long ago, in the snow covered forests of what was then west Deutschland, there was a small castle. The castle was, in fact, so small that it could have passed for a negligibly important fort. It was the castle of Edler Unterwald.
On this day many nobles had come for the winter solstice ball. The Edler was highly excited by, this forcing his already overworked servants and nearby township to work doubly hard to make everything perfect. The chance to be raised up to Baronet or even Baron was too tempting for the greedy man to pass up.
This night however he did not realize that rebellion was settling in as his front gate guards closed the gate, calling to their Kapitän when it sealed. The Kapitän smiled as he walked though the barracks calling out the rebels from their hiding.
Up in the castle proper a raven haired servant walked along the edge of the corridor, head bowed hair obscuring her face only parting slightly when she passed the windows that let in the cold night breeze.
Opposite her were the Edler's children, two girls and a boy. The boy was a stocky blonde man with blue eyes, the elder female was slightly shorter than he and a slightly portly weight befitting a girl of her time, the younger couldn't be more than six with raven hair and sparkling blue eyes.
The elder daughter shoved the servant girl shouting that she hadn't cleaned the daughter's room. The servant curled into a ball protecting herself from the noble girl's kicks until she felt a wet clot of spit hit her hair. Satisfied the girl was finished, the servant rose and followed the noble quietly to her room.
The room was spotless at the time they entered. The noble girl sat at the mirror fumbling with her hair not noticing the servant behind her until it was too late. A quick yank of a sharpened blade across the neck spread her life's blood all across her mirror. A painful and slow death from either blood loss or suffocation followed. She had just enough time to look up and see her assailant, eyes wide with recognition.
The servant walked to the edge of the room sliding into a servant's passage. She emerged at the room of the noble son shortly after discarding her bloodied clothes in favor of a clean set. The boy, well known for his harassment of the female staff tried his best to 'put the moves on her'.
He was quite stunned when she agreed. None the less the man disrobed as it were and commanded the girl to join him in bed. There she taught him the quickest way to a man's heart, between the 4th and 5th rib, with a dagger. As he slowly died she whispered sweet nothings into his ear ending with the word 'Brüder'.
Before she could make her escape from the room the last of the noble children arrived. A chase ensued across the room ending with the child being tackled and stabbed and slashed at in a panicky way. The corpse was almost unidentifiable at that point but the eyes still gazed forward knowing the assailant, tear filled even. The servant girl's tears splashed on the child's face for a good three to five minutes before the servant steadied her resolve and marched off for the barracks.
Somewhere along the way the woman had acquired a small set of armor similar to the castle guard wore. A black robe with the family crest draped over her shoulders. The woman arrived at the barracks just in time to run face to face with the captain. Turning away she called back the code the rebels were using and blended in with the guard that was to relieve the current ballroom guard.
The guard change was smooth, quiet, and efficient. The aftermath was not as quiet as a scream pieced the halls. Taking the queue, the guards stewarded the nobles to the back of the banquet hall, drawing their swords. Hell then descended upon Earth as the guards swords turned on the nobles.
The faster nobles and members of the royal family were allowed to flee. The Edler was not so lucky; the servant girl caught him in the side with her sword following it up with a strike to the neck, cutting deep into the shoulder blade. Tossing aside her helmet, she, Christine Unterwald, his former daughter that he'd thrown from the house as a monster that had stolen her form, ran the Edler though his neck with a sadistic glee. Turning to the guard she assumed her true alp form and vanished into a puff of smoke
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Post by nightreflection on Feb 11, 2011 14:23:11 GMT -5
Bloody revenge, me likes yes!
Nicely written. It has nice pace.
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Post by Odin on Feb 12, 2011 0:06:38 GMT -5
Thanks much. Though the pacing may start to drag soon.
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Post by Odin on Mar 15, 2011 10:54:05 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 6: Last Day[/glow]
Yiska was quite aware that some people were not morning people. Her boss could be considered one of those people; then again she didn’t consider her boss to be an awake person in the slightest. Nor was this messenger that she had a habit of sending after Yiska when she screwed up at something or another. Thus you can imagine the displeasure it gave her to see a mara walking up the pathway to the cabin.
The mara had thick wavy seafoam-blue hair down to her thighs and wore worn a gray skirt and coat always. Her tarnkappe was a wide rimmed hat one would attribute to The Three Musketeers. The fore of the brim always made her eyes impossible to see. Yiska was convinced that she wore some sort of military getup under the outfit. She already knew the girl carried daggers and a handgun with her.
The mara stopped short of Yiska and pointed squarely at the skulls on her hat speaking in a flat voice. “Those are not for sensitive information. Use some form or magic trinket that is tuned to the inboxes at the Bureau. There is too much time unaccounted for between you and home base and the residents will start to question your bird skull count constantly fluctuating between three and one.”
“They’re all I have though.” Yiska pouted looking away from the mara. How she loathed her.
The mara shoved a small red gemstone into Yiska’s chest. “Connected directly to Flannigan’s desk. We’ll be in touch.”
The mara started to leave when the door to the cabin opened and Mye stepped out. “Who’s you’re friend Yiska?”
Before Yiska could answer the mara spun around, extending her hand for an hand shake. “Hello I’m Frau Hillook. It’s a pleasure to meet you.”
“Mye. Very nice to meet you as well miss Hillook. Would you like to come inside?” Mye shook Hillook’s hand tentatively.
“I’m afraid my time here is up. I simply came by because I heard there were alps living here. My kind are… rare in this part of the world. I…” Hillook tilted her hat to the side as her sentence cut off locking her left eye squarely onto Mye’s profile; pupil dilating rapidly. “You… I… I killed you. Seven hundred years ago how are you here. I killed you!”
Hillook pulled out a small handgun backing up rapidly even so much as to trip over herself. She collected herself quickly and made a beeline down the path.
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About two hours later at the Bureau headquarters Hillook barged though the door to Flannigan’s office. As she strode across the room her hair straightened out and turned black as it shortened.
“The Hillook persona eh Miss Unterwald. Did you get the report?” Flannigan looked nonchalantly at the mara.
Christine responded in kind by flinging the rolled up report into his face. “There’s your @$%$ report. I’m going to talk to the shrink for the next two hours.”
Two hours later Flannigan got an enveloped notice from The Bureau’s Psychiatry Department stating that he had control of the Alp Division for the next month as Miss Unterwald would be taking a mandatory vacation from work. Attached was also a notice to find a good mind sifter among the alps for the psychiatrist that had to talk to her.
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