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Post by Amelius on Dec 9, 2005 7:18:34 GMT -5
I moved it so this post doesn't matter ^_^
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Post by RyokoDragonez on Dec 9, 2005 11:14:13 GMT -5
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Beautiful job as always, Amelius. It seems to me that Tony has now been possessed? His grammer is far too 'clean' in the last pannel for it to be him... Or maybe I am just crazy O.o....could be that.
--- Ryoko Dragonez
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Post by Daybreak on Dec 9, 2005 11:25:16 GMT -5
Eeep! Noooo, poor Tony! *huggles the alp* Guh! Now I'm going to be even more impatient for DD to get back up -_-;
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Post by DarkfireTaimatsu on Dec 9, 2005 11:28:41 GMT -5
It seems like I missed something... Or maybe it's just been far too long. Last I remember was all the Zenos turning on the Master Zeno...
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Post by ⑨tyo on Dec 9, 2005 11:40:01 GMT -5
Master is possessing Tony. I just know it.
IT HAS TO BE TRUE. WAAH.
5.
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Post by lysinias on Dec 9, 2005 11:50:13 GMT -5
Ooooooooo... No!!! Tony!!! Such a pretty page too. I can't wait to see the next page... they are always so good.
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Post by Scarecrow on Dec 9, 2005 23:54:29 GMT -5
Oh, gods no... Tony! That isn't you... Now FIGHT HIM UNTILL HE BLOODY GOES BACK TO THE GRAVE HE CRAWLED OUT OF!!!
That's the master. I know it is. hat facial expression wouldn't fit Tonius in this situation... And the speech pattern. And the little inner monologue... It all leads to Tonius being posessed by the Master...
Tony, this only makes us love you all the more!
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Post by Zolah on Dec 10, 2005 7:00:03 GMT -5
Finally i can see it <3 Amelius, you R - O - C - K!
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Post by Daybreak on Dec 11, 2005 15:56:56 GMT -5
Tony, you're too damn noble for your own good. Now he has the Power of the Hat at his disposale! This is much worse than just the scythe. Think, he can change into anyone in the house Someone had better figure out what's going on and steal the hat. I'd suggest nailing Tony down again, but that might make me cry. Again. Oh, and I don't know if there's a page missing, maybe Amelius could post the next-to-last page, too, just to be sure. Danke!
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Post by Scarecrow on Dec 11, 2005 17:38:30 GMT -5
Indeed. Tonius is far too noble for his own good...
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Post by Daybreak on Dec 11, 2005 17:43:21 GMT -5
And that's why we love him. I've caught myself saying "youse," "mine," and speaking in a random German accent several times lately -_-;
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Post by Dundee on Dec 12, 2005 23:31:05 GMT -5
NO!!! NO!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good lord, I really AM suffering from Charby withdrawel!!! STUPID-DINKY-EXPLITIVE-ING-DRUNK DUCK!!!!! Oh, my. Oh my dear, dear Tony. That nasty mage-type thing used your exit as a gateway to the real world, and now it's posessed you. Let Dundee take you into her arms, heal your wounds and make your hair all nice and awsome again. Yes, I know that's pathetic, I'm just a pathetic person. Poor Tony.
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Post by Amelius on Dec 13, 2005 6:22:58 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]everything that was in this post has moved ^_^[/glow]
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Post by DarkfireTaimatsu on Dec 13, 2005 10:49:22 GMT -5
YEEEEEEEE-AH! Tony rocks. I had a feeling he wouldn't be possessed for too long.
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Post by ⑨tyo on Dec 13, 2005 11:00:55 GMT -5
That Tony snake is just too awesome. <D
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Post by Dundee on Dec 13, 2005 17:49:46 GMT -5
YES!!!! OH MY LORDY LOU, I MUST CUDDLE THAT KITTY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really do like cats, you know. I just prefer dogs 'cause they don't make my eyes feel like someone had them for a scrambled egg breakfast. And that one wide, sinister smile covers about everything that cats stand for. But, just a couple of little pieces of constructive criticism: I think that in that last page, you used too similar an effect when Tony snapped back to himself compared to when Zeno had come to himself several comics ago. The climax when the Master found himself in rat form was a little cluttered, but everything else was fine!!! Maybe it's just nerves, being distracted, or not having a lot of practice due to the comic being down, and I don't hold anything against you for it. You've already more than made up for it, and I loves you for it. By de ways, will the scythe have anything to do with the Master's comment in the last panel? The Charby withdrawel must be getting serious! One of the symtoms is babbling endlessly about nothing!! *shuts up right quick*
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Post by Dundee on Dec 13, 2005 17:54:05 GMT -5
By the way, I LOVE the endless emerald halls of Tony's imagination!! My head would probably be a huge, pitch black hole with mind boggling pictures and inscriptions on the walls.
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Post by Scarecrow on Dec 13, 2005 19:01:37 GMT -5
I KNEW IT!!!
Whoo. Now that I've got that out...
Amazing work... Endless deep caves... There's still more to it. I'm almost sure... Or maybe I'm simply being paranoid.
My mind would likely be somewhat... Strange... I've done a drawing of it...
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Post by Daybreak on Dec 13, 2005 19:41:56 GMT -5
GLEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! GO TONY! That's our boy ^__________^ I love those reptile forms. What can I say? The guy looks good in stripes.
Granted, he looked pretty good when he lost the shirt, too. I'm so happy we're finally getting to see his abilities at full throttle.
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Post by lysinias on Dec 13, 2005 21:42:24 GMT -5
Aaah! That is toooo awesome! All those forms of Tony are wicked! Heeheheeee!!!!! Weakened in body, but strong of mind ^-^
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Post by Amelius on Dec 13, 2005 23:09:00 GMT -5
Thanks everybody ^_^ Sims2fanatic says:"But just a couple of little pieces of constructive criticism: I think that in that last page, you used too similar an effect when Tony snapped back to himself compared to when Zeno had come to himself several comics ago. The climax when the Master found himself in rat form was a little cluttered, but everything else was fine!!"
I appreciate the honest critisism! I admit I wasn't quite sure what you meant though(I'm a little slow right now) you mean that Tony is acting like Zeno did when Tony first entered his mind, right? Because he's freaking out and holding his head yet again? ;D It's more clear to see when I have the pages set up like this but often I do repeat certain things like this on purpose (I could probably type a whole page full of odd things that draw similarity in CTV) If that is what you meant by it. It's because both of these are being performed by the same entity (master) but in different bodies, so his reaction is that of "not again, @#$!" though I admit the fact that it cuts right to "rat" in the next panel after Tony is back in control does seem a bit sudden. I had some dialogue that made the transition smoother but that got lost due to circimstances I've forgotten ^_^
"Maybe it's just nerves, being distracted, or not having a lot of practice due to the comic being down, and I don't hold anything against you for it. You've already more than made up for it, and I loves you for it."
Sadly I have no excuse for that, I had this page done the day DD crashed! And aww thanks ;D
"By de ways, will the scythe have anything to do with the Master's comment in the last panel?"
(shhh, is secret!) Ok it might have something to do, or there just might be other people in there....we'll see on the next page, which I'm still working on (with DD down my motivation has dropped off the chart, I was working up a surplus and when the comic I was working on got destroyed, I just didn't touch it again and did other things ^_^) I'm working on it again though, so we might see that soon because I'm eager to color the lineart in the one after that which is scanned in already.
Also an interesting point about Tony's mind, it's based around a place I've often dreamed about that has green curtains and hallways. I almost wish I could drwa it better, since there's supposed to be a huge staircase and big green stained-glass windows as well.
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Post by Zolah on Dec 14, 2005 14:46:08 GMT -5
Oh my god! it took me a while to find out where the comic page where XD
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Post by Deme on Dec 19, 2005 17:12:53 GMT -5
I noticed something...In Zeno's head and in the real world, Tony's eyes are blue (in addition to the wounds and the unpointy hair). In his own head, his eyes are yellow like normal.
Is this something he willed in his head, is he actually 'fixing' himself, or is that just how he looks in his head, something he's used to enough that it's a part of his mental image of himself(like the striped shirt)?
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Post by Amelius on Dec 21, 2005 16:08:04 GMT -5
He's willed it in his own head since that is the way he prefers to be seen, stripey shirt and all. [glow=red,2,300](Edit: page moved)[/glow]
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Post by Wolfy on Dec 21, 2005 16:14:32 GMT -5
yay! charby withdrawl soothingness! whats going to happen now?
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Post by DarkfireTaimatsu on Dec 21, 2005 16:19:57 GMT -5
Wow... It's just... amazing. As usual. Right idea, Kavonn, wrong time. He'd better extract that thing soon... Doesn't he have to go visiting with Phineas the next day? And Charby seems a little regretful... For something. (His parents, maybe? Or that other girl...? What was her name? The one he and Vic fought over. It was a long time ago...)
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Post by Daybreak on Dec 21, 2005 16:26:40 GMT -5
Ooooooh, and we were so close to a revelation! And... and... SQUEE!!! The page is sooooo pretty! How I miss Charby -_-;
And Charby's getting depressed again. I ought to give him a big hug!
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Post by lysinias on Dec 21, 2005 16:31:58 GMT -5
AMAZING. Beautiful... just, oh good lord it's fantastic. And now I am dying to see what is wrong with Zeno...
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Post by Dundee on Dec 21, 2005 17:40:29 GMT -5
Are... are those Kavonn's pajamas? ?? I MUST SAVE THIS!!!!!!! Who knows, maybe someday I'll be doing a fan art of Charby and gang having a slumber party. And is it just me, or are his eyes more red than usual? They're normally silvery grey, correct? Has he been crying again or did the commotion wake him up when he was really tired?
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Post by silverwolf on Dec 21, 2005 18:51:12 GMT -5
Not only are Tony's eyes fixed in his mind, as are his arm, eye, and hair!
Aww, Charby's angsting.
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