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Ashlika wanders around the school,muttering about being late....She opens her locker,and finds a strange back pack.

"what the...?this isn't mine..."
SHe kicks it away,and it shouts "HEY!"
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She blinks,and falls backwards,slipping on a sock....

She fell backwards,and then peeered at it.
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It squirmed and started to move,then spit out a white devil.

He grumbled.
"do you MIND not kicking that?jeez i've had enough of you people.."AH! lets kick it and give it a bruised be-hind.humans are so narrow minded....but anyways...enough of that...now...what is your name?"

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She blniks...

"my....name?"

He nods.
"yes.tell me your name so i can write it in my book..."

"....why?"

"BECAUSE! EVERYONE KNOWS THAT WHEN YOU SEE A WHITE DEVIL..HE GIVES YOU A POWER OF SOME SORT.."

"a power.."

"YES! LIKE IN THE STORY!"

"story?"she peeps.

"JUST TELL ME THE NAME!"

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"o...kay....ash-li-ka..."

"ashlika?"

He makes a face,then writes it down.

"what?whats wrong with ashlika "

"..nothing.."

"well anyways...any questions?"

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"your a devil right...?"

He nodds..

"yes of course..."

"but..your white.."
She looks confused...

"what about it?"

"aren't normal devils supposed to be red or something?"

"i'm what because i'm the polar opposite of everything
a normal devil should be.."

"but isn't the polar opposite of a devil an angel?"

He relizes something...


"NO MORE QUESTIONS!"

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"now then..i'll be in touch.i must get my backpack and contact headquaters too..."

The back pack was there a moment ago...but now its gone..

"where did it go?"

It shows two small demons with the back pack hidden in a doorwell,sniggering.

"i just had it...WAIT...."

He suddenly stopps and smells the ground,doggie style.

"OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

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Ashlika blinks...

"what?what is it?whats wrong?"

"black demons!they took my bag!they took everything!"

He shouts,punching the locker.

"what was in that bag that was so important?"
Ashlika says,raising an eyebrow.
"my staff!my way home!my phone!My entire livelyhood!"
He started up.

"now all i've got is my gun,my book,and three demon food rations!"
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"look...calm down..i'm sure you'll find your.."

Ashlika starts,only to be interupted by the white devil..

"I've GOT to find them!"

He runs away,after the demons...

Ashlika(thinking) "what an odd kid...he's probably crazy or something...
theres no such thing as white devils.."
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Ashlika (thinking) "..but if he was crazy..then why did he have horns and wings?"

Ashlika(thiknig) "...if he is an actual devil...he looks young...where are his parents.."

Ashlika(thinking) "...what if he's teling the truth?whered did the guy go.."
Ashlika(thinking) "....the bell rang...i should go...maybe he'll turn up tommorow.."

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She walked outside,and heard some violent noises coming from the bushes...

Ashlika(thinking) "...that sounds like that kid"

She walks into the bushes,only to get bitten by one of them.
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"GAH!"

She shakes it off, and grabs the white dude.

"alright.WHAT IN GODS NAME IS GOING ON HERE?i want answers...."

"ashlika..."

*she continues going on and on about how much he hasn't explained..*


"ashlika.......WATCH OUT!"

WHAM!

One of the smaller demons hit her in the head with the back pack....

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Instead of falling, she grips her head and says "OW~!"

She gets up,walks over to one of the smaller ones,and pops its head off.

Green goo gets everywhere.
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*panel squeance of her killing the demons in various semi-gruesome ways*
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She walks over to the white dude,and picks him up again...

"now about those answers..."

"yeaaaaaaah....about them....I GOTTA RUN!BYE!"

He slips away from her.

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*panel seueance of runni=ng..*
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White dude knocks on the door of a house..

Older woman opens the door...

"What is it dearie?"

"LADY!you gotta help me..tihs crazy girl is.."

"IF YOUR SO SMART THEN WHY DID YOU RUN TO MY HOUSE?"
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Ashlika pipes in...

Older woman."oh hi honEY!"

"hi mom.."

Older woman looks down at the white dude..

"and who's this?"

Ashlika smirks.".someone that has some explaining to do.."

[ogrefairy]

Oh wow! That's awesome! Such an interesting way of starting. It's gonna be amazing to see it drawn out.

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yey.thankies...sorry for no descriptions.....i just origginally wrote it so i would remember what the hell i'm talking about..-_-

[ogrefairy]

Of course. ^^

[NightWing]

Hey, there's nothing wrong with that. Honestly I kinda expected you to do this kind of thing on a notepad file or something. Having it up here's a bonus, as far as I'm concerned.

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oh yes and every "---"

is 1 comic page.^^

[NightWing]

Oh wow, so that's like 17 pages.

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and this is just chapter one.^^

[NightWing]

Wow.

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Zoom in of the white dude,tied to a chair with a light shining in his face.

Ashlikas mom "so you expect me to believe that your a white devil...that FLEW down from the heavans to tell that she MIGHT have a power of some sort,
and then just RUN away?"

He nodded."yes"

She winced."do you think i'm stupid?"

He thought for a moment..

"yes."
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She raised her eyebrows..

"your just some crazed albino child.you realize that?"

"and you ma'am,have never seen anything besides human before."

She sighs,and leaves.
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White dude(thinking) why is it so hard for these people to believe me?!

White dude(thinking) i mean,serously! what normal human child has A TAIL?! and the wings are usually the first thing anyone notices.

White dude(thinking) maybe thes epeople are blind..

White dude(thinking) or slow..or on crack..

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Ashlika walks in....
"soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..."

The white dude barks."SO WHAT?!"

Ashlika winces.."okay...don't be cranky!....we'll let you go..."

He nodds.

Ashlika looks down.."just one thing.....where are your parents at?"
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He looks confused...

"you can tell us.we won't bite.."
She tries once again.

He blinks..

"what are 'parents'?"

She looks shocked..
"oKAY....sorry i asked..."

She leavs again.
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"i'm being serous mom...he claims to knpw all this crap about demons and what not..but i asked him about parents and he looked at me like i was nuts."
Ashlika explained to her mom...

"maybe he's telling the truth.."

Her mom sighed..

"maybe your right..lets go ask him.."

the both leave..
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They come in to find that he's un tied himself,and is loading that weird-looking un.
"AHA!you thought you could capture me,BUT LOOK AT YOU NOW!at the mercy of my Demonizer 7!eat lead,fowl pigs!"

He pulls the trigger,but nothing happens.

"FOWL PIGS?!"
Ashlika pipes in,coming closer.
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"what on earth?i thought i just loaded this.."
He looks down the barrel,only to somehow get shot between the eyes by a late bullet.
He looks up at the small hole and sighs..
"no harm done"
He reasons,until some green goo drips down his face from the hole...
"OOPS......oh no..."
He falls forewards into the arm or the chair.
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Ashlika growls..

"WHAT AN IDIOOOOOT!"
"arrggh!EVEN IF HE IS THELLING THE TRUTH....why couldn't i have been visited by something SMART?!
something NOBLE?!like in the movies!"

She sighs..

"and now he's killed himself on his own gun..."

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LATER.....SOMEWHERE ELSE.....


Older guy voice:"..you shot yourself on your own gun?
white dude:"it was a mistake!they tied me up!"
Older guy voice:"..but it says you looked down the barrel.."
White dude:thats just...a complication..but thats not the point!this girl is the right one..i can feel it.
older guy voice:..fine..
a clawed hand appears on white dudes shoulder.
"...go...now..."
Hw pushes the white dude...somewhere..
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Ashlika is in the tub,sighing off the rest of the day.

Suddenly,the white due falls from the ceiling with a sploosh.

"WHAT?how are you still alive?!"

He smirks...

"i was re-vived"
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"your foreheads still bleeding.."

Ashlika commented.


"YOU BROUGHT ME BACK TO LIFE AND YOU STILL DIDN'T HEAL MY FOREHEAD?!"

He shouted at the ceiling.

[ogrefairy]

*giggle*

Wow!

That's awesome!

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thank-you.

[NightWing]

Hehehe.

The higher powers don't think too highly of him either xD

It's been awesome thus far. Keep it up ;D

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XD

^^^

thankies.