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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 17, 2007 16:52:05 GMT -5
O.O
Wow!
Poor Zerlocke!
Wonderful writing as always!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 17, 2007 16:53:43 GMT -5
Yup. Zerlocke completed the easy course. I must admit i'm kinda afraid of Andromeda right now  |
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 17, 2007 16:56:29 GMT -5
So's am I!
I wouldn't wanna be in Zerlocke's position right now!
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Sept 17, 2007 17:05:32 GMT -5
Tabiris...you are evil. Truely evil  |
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Post by tabiris on Sept 17, 2007 17:20:06 GMT -5
thats music to my ears. (bad joke drum sequence)
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 12:33:48 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 9-3[/glow]
The next day Mye and Tony were out for a walk in the daylight. Tony held a picnic basket in his hand. The forest remained perfectly quiet. It was mid-day.
“That were ein swell picnic Mye.” Tony put an arm around Mye’s shoulder and smiled at her.
“It was quite pleasant.” Mye smiled back and pecked Tony on the cheek wrapping an arm around his waist. “Say Tony did you notice how differently Tabby treated Zerlocke last night.”
“Not really.” Tony shrugged. “How does Tabby usually treats Zerlocke?”
“Usually he treats him like a little boy and talks down on him. Last night he was treating him like an equal.” Mye frowned slightly.
“Hmm… maybes he’s adapted to somethings. Or maybes he knows somethings abouts Zerlocke that he didn’ts before.” Tony gave another shrug. “Maybes Hex will knows. Lets ask hims.”
The two made their way up the stairs to the house. Tony held the door open for Mye like a gentlemen.
Mye looked out towards the forest and saw something move it looked like a gray wolf elf. “Yeah. Lets get inside.”
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 12:34:48 GMT -5
short update. good news i dont have to change the title. bad news. cant thing of any.  |
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 12:51:44 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 10-1[/glow]
“Why didn’t you attack?” Zeno paced in the cave angrily. “You could have had them.”
“Aye, that I could have however I’m working up something much more sinister for them.” Leonard-Damien sat at the cave entrance looking out into the forest. “And you’ll like it much more, too.”
“I’d better or I’ll put you back in that vial.” Zeno held up the vial of potion to prove his point.
Humph, like you’re strong enough. Damien rolled his eyes. “If you don’t like this more you have no sense of taste.”
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Mye was out picking herbs for her potions early in the morning the next day. Tony was sleeping in the house and everyone else was there doing their early morning routines.
A gray blur passed in front of Mye. She looked after it almost positive she saw Leonard. Not thinking she gave chase.
The wolf-elf jumped across a creek and rounded a tree. Mye, not being so nimble, only jumped halfway and slipped on a rock falling face first into the creek. Coughing and sputtering she crawled onto land.
The wolf elf was waiting for her. As soon as she was up he turned tail and ran straight away. Mye got up now positive it was Leonard and chased him into a clearing.
“Hey toots.” In the center of the clearing was Zeno with scythe in one hand and Tony’s hat on his head.
“Zeno, where’s Leonard?” Mye looked around and felt herself being lifted.
“He’s not here at the moment but he told me to tell you I killed him.” Damien whacked Mye upside the head and knocked her out. “Told you you’d enjoy the plan Zeno.”
“That you did. Now lets get her to the cave.” Zeno jumped up into the air, flying low under the tree line.
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 12:53:35 GMT -5
*giggle*
No worries!
Nice segment! We finally got a little Tony/Mye time!
...and some ominous foreshadowing!
EDIT: That was for the first one! For this one you get a
OOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
with lots and lots a o's!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 13:10:10 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Andromeda’s Task 3[/glow]
Saw blades and spike beds sat dormant in the room. Zerlocke walked carefully around them. He was blindfolded trusting in the clicks and clanks as traps moved.
A soft whoosh sound filled the air as a knife sped towards Zerlocke’s head. In a matrix style move he bent back and caught the blade throwing it not back where it came from but behind him. There was a soft thud.
“Good job Zerlocke. Flawless victory. And only after seven hundred and fifty-three tries. Excellent progress.” Andromeda walked up to Zerlocke pulling the knife out of her head.
Zerlocke pulled off his blindfold. “Goody. What’s the next phase in our training sessions.”
“The next step is to rest then we can focus on another type of training.” Andromeda melted all of the obstacles away.
“But I’m on a roll here. Please.” Zerlocke got on his knees.
“No. This is far more dangerous than that obstacle course you just finished and you are really tired.” Andromeda popped Zerlocke on the head with a newspaper.
“I’m not tired I can go…” Zerlocke fell over, unconscious.
“Told ya.” Andromeda picked up Zerlocke and walked him to his room and tossed him on his bed.
“If you rest good and finish this training I’ll give ya a nice surprise.” Andromeda smiled at Zerlocke’s unconscious face. “Sweet dreams you idiot.”
Andromeda made her way out into the halls and ran into Lemrya. “Hey there. Aren’t you just such a cutie?” Andromeda scratched Lemrya’s head. “I’m a bad person aren’t I?”
Lemrya chirped and shook its head.
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 13:21:47 GMT -5
Damn! Andromeda is really scary!
Yet she is still one of the only ones that likes Lemrya!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 13:56:28 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 10-2[/glow]
A knock came at Tony’s door followed by Tabby’s voice. “Tony! Mye’s missing!”
“What? I’s gots to find hers!” Tony shot up and ran for the door. He ripped it open and ran into Tabby’s fist.
“Sorry Tony but I can’t let you blindly rush in. You’re gonna need some help.” Tabby picked up Tony and took him to the basement.
“I’s needs to do this on mein own.” Tony tried to get up but hex held him down.
“No Tonius VonHarnier. This is my fight, too, Hexavier’s and everyone else in the house too. However only a handful of us will fight because only a handful of us have the potential to fight.” Tabby tossed the green plumed hat to Tony. “So lets suit up the combatants.”
“Who all is fighting?” Tony took the hat and placed it on his head.
“You, Me, Tabby, Kavonn, Charby, and we may have some assistance from Zerlocke and his group.” Hex picked Tony up off the floor.
“Lets do this.” Tony stood up and adjusted his hat.
“Not yet Tony. Have to get one last thing. Got to wake the twins.” Tabby picked up the two gems that had been sitting on the table and dropped them onto the floor. Nothing happened.
“Dey gonna do anything?” Tony walked over and tapped the gems. All at once the ground beneath them shot up in the form of hilts with both gems resting at the pommel.
“Excellent work Tony. Those two are lazy but they have an amazing power. If they physically destroy an object that is most dear to a person then it will destroy that person, most useful. Take them. I’m going to talk to Kavonn about tacking orbs.” Tabby bounced up the staircase hiding a gleeful smile at the idea of battle.
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 13:56:54 GMT -5
I may be able to wrap up the story by tonight if i work at it.
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 14:00:50 GMT -5
Wow!
Very cool!
Hmmmmmmmmmm... those other two stones are very interesting!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 14:16:08 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Andromeda’s Task 4[/glow]
Clare was walking around her home when she passed Zerlocke’s room and heard a female voice coming from it. “That was incredible Zerlocke. You are very adept at that trick. I can believe it.”
Clare nearly blanched as Zerlocke replied. “Well it’s cause you’re so tight I was able shoot it so fast.”
“Oh stop you are gonna make a girl very happy someday.” Clare fell over twitching.
“Well you’re the one who showed me my talents.” Clare reached for the ceiling like a dieing person.
“You’re ability to learn quickly helped too. Though you did leave it a little raw on the inside” Clare was starting to bleed from her eyes. “Now we have to go. You’re sisters can’t know about this but we need to hurry to Charby’s.”
“Ok.” Clare was now up peeking through the doors lock. She saw Rosemary and Zerlocke hold hands and teleport.
“Whats going on?” Clare faced away from Charby’s place and teleported.
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 14:16:55 GMT -5
Last instalment of andromeda's task. and for the prudish no they didn't do that i just thought it would be fun to word it that way |
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 14:38:16 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 10-3[/glow]
“Oh good you’re here. Zerlocke I heard about your feat that was amazing.” Tabby clapped Zerlocke on the shoulder. “You’ve grown up since we first met.”
“Thanks. Now what’s going on?” Zerlocke looked at the now combat ready group around him.
Tony had twin sword hanging on his waist and back and was wearing a green and orange version of Bruce Lee’s Game of death outfit (Similar to the Kill Bill cover outfit for those not learned in Bruce Lee) that complemented his hat. Tabby was not much different except that he had a scythe with blades on either end of the shaft. Hex, Kavonn and Charby were in tuxedos as per Kavonn’s interesting taste in clothing.
“Mye were kidnapped so wes goings after her.” Tony walked forward.
“Oh dear we must make haste.” Zerlocke clapped his hands together.
“You alright Zerlocke usually such news would send you spinning.” Charby looked at Zerlocke carefully.
“My bet is Ms. Andromeda is to blame.” Kavonn tipped his hat to Andromeda.
“Quite she gave me a thorough training session on control.” Zerlocke grinned. “So can I have a cool suit too Kavonn?”
“Sure.” Kavonn tipped his wand and Zerlocke was suddenly in an executioner outfit. “It goes with the axe.”
“I don’t need that thing it’s a tool to assist me. True power is from within.” Zerlocke smiled.
“Hmm… you’ve really grown. Here then.” Kavonn tipped his wand and Zerlocke was in a fancy suit.
“Now how abouts wes gets goings.” Tony fingered the pommel of one of the swords irritably.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Sept 18, 2007 14:39:48 GMT -5
That was frikin hillariousXD
and the rest of the chapters were awesome. But that last one was just awesomeXD
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 15:02:22 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 11-1[/glow]
Soon they will be here and then my plan will come to fruition. Leonard-Damien sat over Mye caressing her head in a furred paw.
“This is taking too long.” Zeno grumbled.
“Silence they are near.” Damien shot a cold look at Zeno and laid Mye down on the ground.
The cave entrance was blocked from view as several people came to the entrance.
“Welcome fools shall we play this fair since there are more of you than me. You each come at me one at a time and I will take you on. If you win you get the girl If you lose you give me your magical tools of my choice.” Damien opened his arms smiling.
“Agreed.” Tabby stepped forward scythe in hand. “Shall we open?”
“How fun, however against you I pick Zeno to fight.” Zeno walked forward from the shadows.
“I’m going to enjoy this.” Zeno raised his scythe high.
There was a blur as the two scythe masters clashed and broke apart. Tabby’s scythe was split apart at the center.
“Ha! My weapon’s better.” Zeno smiled gleefully.
“A weapon is a tool. True power comes from inside.” Tabby raised his weapons. “And now I have two scythes.”
The two clashed again and broke apart. Each one lost an arm; the difference was Tabby’s grew back and they clashed again Tabby’s scythe became softer and bent. Zeno had a flashback to the last time they fought Tabby did this and she scythe wrapped around his own and he lost his weapon. Zeno lowered his weapon a bit and it cleaved through Tabby. A blood spurt covered Zeno and he dropped his scythe pointing at the ruby red crystal that flew from the collapsed body.
“Bang!” The crystal exploded. Zeno grabbed his scythe and trudged into the shadows.
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 15:34:25 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 11-2[/glow]
“Next Challenger.” Damien walked forth. “How bout you Andromeda? You can join your boyfriend now that he’s been reduced to stardust.”
“Bastard!” Andromeda shot forward snapping her whip at Damien. Damien nonchalantly caught the whip and ripped Andromeda towards himself and ripped the crystal from her body.
“Zeno.” Damien tossed the crystal behind him and a weak ‘bang’ was heard as the crystal exploded. “Next victim.”
Zerlocke walked forward Axe in hand. “Perish you weakling.”
Damien did not take being called weak well and broke his body into sharp tentacles that shot at Zerlocke. Zerlocke took a deep breath and spit fire at the tentacles burning them. Zerlocke smiled triumphantly until he felt a spike shoot through his back. The spike formed into Leonard-Damien and dropped Zerlocke.
“Nice try you but I get the axe now.” Damien kicked the axe into the shadows and Zerlocke at the cave entrance.
Clare and Rosemary shot into the cave attacking Damien with blind fury. Unfortunately their predictable attacks were easily countered. Clare was knocked out of the cave and Rosemary fell onto the cavern floor. Damien turned his hand into a sword and thrust it at Rosemary. Blood began to pour onto the cavern and Rosemary shrieked. Kavonn had stepped between the two took the hit.
“Idiot. You were perhaps the only one that posed a threat. Shouldn’t have jumped in for the lady.” Damien dragged the sword through Kavonn’s chest knocking his staff into the shadows.
“One minute break.” Damien stood back letting Rosemary drag Kavonn to the side.
“You idiot, jumping out in front of me like that. Why?” Rosemary shook Kavonn slightly rough.
“I… love… you.” Kavonn forced the words out, he felt himself slowly die. Rosemary started to cry and bit Kavonn hard in the neck.
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 16:20:28 GMT -5
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Dang! So there just killing everyone!
And Kevonn's gonna be a Vampire?
Wow!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 16:37:31 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 11-3[/glow]
Hex dragged the beaten Charby to the side passing his amulet to Tony. “Beat him Tony. Or I’ll kill you.”
Tony stepped forward. “I’s plans to crush him.”
Leonard-Damien stepped forward. “Well Tony it’s just you and me. I think these disguises and false name are worthless now.” Damien transformed into Olaf and adjusted Tony’s hat that sat on his head. “Guten Tag.”
“Olaf. What’s goings on?” Tony grabbed the twin swords and drew them. Each was a straight blade with only one edge.
“I’ve been waiting for this for years Tony.” Olaf took up the Staff of Oswego. “The day I destroy you for abandoning me.”
“Youse were killed Olaf!” Tony stabbed his swords into the ground. “What were I’s supposed to dos?”
“It was your fault. The hunter was there because of you. Now give me mein hat and you’re head.” Olaf held his empty hand out.
“Overs mein dead body.” Tony pulled up the swords and lunged at Olaf.
Olaf nimbly sidestepped Tony and cut at him with the staff. Tony spun around and caught the staff with a sword sending both flying back into the shadows. Olaf quickly reached towards the hat on Tony’s head but Tony jumped back and cut off Olaf’s hand.
“Very good Tony. But I’ve picked up some tricks from Damien,” Olaf’s hand regenerated.
“What is this about really Olaf?” Tony got up and held his sword at the ready.
“Revenge of course. You were always so weak. Then you found someone you loved and I tried to help you get her by removing the obstacle. Then you get in my way and have me weakened! And now the trash I tried to kill thinks he can use me! You people do not deserve the lives you have I should never have cared about anything but mein self and mein hat.” Olaf swung at Tony and the hat on Tony’s head flew off into the darkness at Zeno’s feet beside the other sword.
“If youse cares about that hat so much one of these swords can destroy you and the hat.” Tony rushed at the general direction of the hat.
Olaf blindsided Tony knocking him to the ground. “I think not Tony. Once I reclaim my hat I will kill everyone here.”
Zeno walked out of the shadows sword and hat in his hand. He dropped the hat on the ground and stabbed it with the sword as Olaf rushed at him. There was a tumultuous explosion and Olaf was gone.
Zeno lay on the ground and Tony watched as the twin swords dissipated into nothingness. A white celestial looking being appeared that looked a heck of a lot like Tabby only older and a little balder. It picked up Mye who was adorning only what appeared to be a rag of a coat that was Zeno’s that Charby had given him. The being drew a mark on Mye’s head and handed her to Tony. It then turned to Zeno and picked up his body or more a ghost of his body that was still whole. The being then grabbed Kavonn’s wand and put it into Kavonn’s hand.
The being turned to Tony. “Thank you.”
The being vanished leaving Tony to stare awkwardly into nothingness. Mye awoke and sneezed.
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 16:37:59 GMT -5
The End I'll post the epilogue later tonight |
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 16:45:39 GMT -5
Wow!
wow!
wow!
That was good! And interesting... and.. and... Wow!
*claps loudly*
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Post by NightWing on Sept 18, 2007 17:21:19 GMT -5
Incredible work. I enjoyed every installment immensely Tabiris. Bravo.
*claps* Only problem is, it's over. ;D
All good stories must end eventually.
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 17:49:38 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Epilogue[/glow]
“Bless you Mye.” Tony rubbed Mye’s nose with a handkerchief.
“Thanks hun.” Mye smiled putting her hand in Tony’s. “I still can’t believe it’s been a year.”
They stood in front of a stone grave. The grave read ‘Here lies Zeno Ramera Chavez’. They left flowers there every day. Today was the day. Mye wore a dress of pure white and Tony a white Tuxedo. They exchanged rings right here then everyone went off to do their own thing. Zerlocke had stayed to leave his own type of gift. The graveyard had recently become overrun with Mye plushies that spilled off the grave or were taken by the local zombie to play with.
Tony held Mye against him. “Lets go home toots.”
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 17:50:37 GMT -5
And theres the epilogue.  |
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 17:55:03 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Sweet ending... cept Zeno being dead but he was a jerk in here so that worked...
Now they're married! Yay!
Kudos to you Tabiris! That was wonderful!
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Post by tabiris on Sept 18, 2007 19:38:34 GMT -5
It's also the first time i've ever completed a fan-fic though the otherones i never pout online or were made pointless by somehting else. |
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Post by ogrefairy on Sept 18, 2007 19:49:50 GMT -5
Hey you did great!
If you ever start posting another I will be sure to read it!
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