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Post by Angel--of--Music on Jul 29, 2007 15:11:46 GMT -5
O.o total plot twist. awesome
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Post by tabiris on Jul 29, 2007 16:01:57 GMT -5
I think it was a plot murder actually. ;D
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Jul 30, 2007 16:34:55 GMT -5
Plot twist, plot murder is when you kill the story. (in my world )
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Post by tabiris on Jul 30, 2007 18:59:47 GMT -5
good point.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2007 0:24:33 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 4-1[/glow]
A full month since the incident subtle changes in the house did show. Tony was much more happy. Menu had gone through the full moon completely indifferent and if anything much more romantic than usual according to Clare whose dress seemed a little mussed and was covered with attic dust at the time (Charby was out and about that night hunting). Kavonn was a bit more confident towards Rosemary despite her continued indifference. Charby was ever bold and watchful though more cautious in the basement. Crispo, Foomy, and Phineas, showed less change but they left a spot in Kavonn’s room empty as if the Rosemary avatar would walk in any moment. Daray and Mannick had little communication with the avatar so they simply missed the person who would get up and change the channel no matter what.
Zeno was strangely affected by this he seemed to have difficulty walking around for more than an hour without the scythe or some sort of accompaniment. This severe change caused him to neglect Mye. Tony would make a comment or two about it to him and continue his usual niceness to Mye not bothering to leap upon the opportunity. This was not lost upon Hexavier whose ever-watchful eyes became even more omnipotent.
Mye, while sad that Zeno was neglectful, continued her patterns from before the appearance of her helper. Her room became impossible to penetrate unless she opened it somehow and her lab was marked “Do Not Enter”. Mye would simply show to cook and move between her room, lab, and kitchen. She didn’t do anything recreational whatsoever. She tried to get Zeno’s attention from time to time or Tony’s; Zeno would wave or hug if she got close and Tony would strike up simple conversation and leave with a guilty smile.
Dull and slowly the lint for a mansion settled upon Mikko’s abode. As such did the unkemptness of the house. Eventually Mye stopped cooking and nobody noticed except Menu who managed to pick up Mye’s abandoned work task with Clare’s help. Nobody ever found out who killed the avatar of Rosemary or why the others vanished but it became so as nobody would ever know. Mye was choked up about it and so she sought out Tony for comfort, who finally worked up his nerve to kiss Mye, right when Zeno walked in with his scythe.
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2007 0:32:12 GMT -5
this part was a doozey to write as the inspiration was quite difficult to work with as i couldn't find the right way to go about it so i decided to wing it.
and so a large Cliff awaits. happy climbing.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Jul 31, 2007 16:59:41 GMT -5
*shrugs* Might as well try.
*starts climbling*
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2007 17:30:48 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 4-2[/glow]
“So this is why is it Tony. This is why you told me.” Zeno raised his scythe slowly. “Goodbye Tony. It was fun while it lasted.”
“Zeno stop. He didn’t mean anything by it. I went to him.” Mye stood between Tony and Zeno holding her hands up.
“So you chose to betray me Mye. Then you shall join Tony traitorous slut.” Zeno made to swing forward but could not pull his scythe forward; there was a ghostly hand upon it halting his attack.
“I knew waiting would prove beneficial.” Behind Zeno was a guy as tall as Daray. His hair was the same shade of blue Clare’s was. He wore a simple blue t-shirt and blue jeans. His eyes however were like Charby’s. Cupped in his arm that was not holding the scythe was the Rosemary avatar still with her chest slashed. “How dare you attack Miss Mye and Master Tony?”
“Who the hell are you?” Zeno wrenched his scythe from the man’s grasp and stood back. “How dare you defend the traitorous bastards?!”
Taking the opportunity to hide Tony grabbed my and placed his hat on her head. “Thinks invisible and hides somewheres safes. I’s will distracts hims.” With that Tony charged Zeno.
The man with Rosemary shot past Tony and handed him the avatar Rosemary corpse and shoved him out of the way. The man spun and caught the scythe by the handle but the blade made a long gash on his left arm blood welling and pouring onto the floor at a dangerous pace. “Chyld I suggest you step away. You have no chance.”
“I’m not the one spilling half his blood onto the carpet.” Zeno pulled back the scythe and brought it down again. There was a “thunk” sound as two wooden handles collided. The man had produced a scythe of his own from thin air and locked blades with Zeno.
“That is true chyld but I have a definite advantage over you.” The man’s wound healed and pitch black surrounded him in the form of a cloak and hood that obscured his face for all but the red eyes. “Ready to join me on a ride across The River Styx?”
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2007 17:32:00 GMT -5
To clarify he is not the grim reaper. he is using a scare tactic. we have all seen that guy anyways when Mye died.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Jul 31, 2007 18:41:49 GMT -5
Vidor? *falls off cliff because distracted, is falling* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2007 21:32:43 GMT -5
wow that cliff was steep. *looks over edge.* due to technical difficulties, my girlfriend took medicines with many negitive impacts i am somewhat uninspired to write the fight scene cause all i can think about is 530 miles dividing me and my very sick loved one.
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Post by Wolfy on Jul 31, 2007 21:38:18 GMT -5
Oh no. *hug* I hope she gets better soon. Take your time, dear, we can wait. Keep us updated on her condition, ok?
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Jul 31, 2007 21:38:32 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=black,left,300]Aww, don't worry, write when you want to, I'm not going to rush.[/shadow][/glow]
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Post by tabiris on Jul 31, 2007 22:17:45 GMT -5
She ish much better now. and she says thank you for your comments and says they're cute. thank you all for thine support. *bows*
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Aug 1, 2007 6:43:02 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] [shadow=black,left,300]Oh, that's good that she's feeling better
Now, is anyone going to revive meh? D:[/shadow][/glow]
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Post by ZeroVX on Aug 1, 2007 9:21:25 GMT -5
*revives her*
How's that?
Nice work, by the way.
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Post by tabiris on Aug 1, 2007 13:07:54 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 4-3[/glow]
The walls were scarred. The TV smashed with scythes interlocked into the screen. The couch was slathered with blood. Twin trails of blood led into the basement. Tony gazed upon the room with the lifeless body of the Rosemary avatar in his arms.
“Bang.” Downstairs Zeno’s voice echoed up to the living room. “Gotcha!”
Tony dropped the body unceremoniously and rushed for the basement and ran down the steps. At the base Zeno stood battered with a look of victory upon his face. In front of him the headless body of the man who challenged him on it’s knees.
“Youse monster Zeno! What has youse done?!” Tony ran over to the decapitated body. There was nothing anyone could do for him.
“Monster. You wanted me to get rid of the Rosemary avatar and the pedestal. I bet you did just so you could get Mye. And I bet you hired him to kill me didn’t you “Master Tony”?” Zeno pointed at Tony’s head. “Goodbye, partner. Ba…”
The decapitated bodies arm stretched out and wringed Zeno’s neck shoving him to the wall. The body stood up and walked forward. Oddly the entire body seemed to shrink with the arm. The head reformed as the body came within a couple feet of Zeno. “They say you are what you eat.” The shapers body shifted to a perfect replica of Zeno. “I guess I’d better look the part.”
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Post by tabiris on Aug 1, 2007 13:09:21 GMT -5
for al those expecting an epic battle. There may be clips reminised upon later.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Aug 1, 2007 17:01:44 GMT -5
ooo. Dark.
And shank youse zero!
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Post by tabiris on Aug 2, 2007 18:25:53 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 5-1[/glow] There was darkness; oh its eyes were just closed. It opened its eyes and looked around. It was in a too big for it bed and there was a red guitar in the corner and usual furniture for a bedroom as well. That was right this was its room, his room. Something moved. There was someone sitting on the bedpost in front of him. It was pure white. He blinked. The creature was closer. It wore a green coat and plumed brown hat. He blinked again. It had yellow eyes just like Tony’s; its face was adorned with a smile that sent chills down his spine. He tried to speak but could only groan. The door burst open behind him. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tony was lying in his room on his bed staring at the ceiling. He felt so low after the incident. He turned his gaze to the dresser eyeing the hole where Zeno had nailed him when Zeno was possessed. The door creaked open. Hexavier walked in looking none too friendly. “What possessed you to do that you moron?” Hex slammed the door behind him. “You are exceedingly lucky that someone showed up to save Mye and you.” “Hex at this point I’s washings that he did kills me.” Tony sighed and sat up. His eyes and hair were in their natural state; his hat was still with Mye. “Shut it Tony. You’d best do some butt kissing or Zerlocke might just swoop in when he shows up later tonight and leave with Mye. And I’m considering just letting him so long as I can go too.” Hex pulled Tony up off his bed. “Come on Bosco time to check on Zeno.”
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Post by tabiris on Aug 2, 2007 18:27:37 GMT -5
and this is a different piece really seeing as it shows two seperate scenes rather than one.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Aug 2, 2007 19:34:20 GMT -5
Interestment:D
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Post by tabiris on Aug 2, 2007 20:07:39 GMT -5
oh and i forgets to mention both these scenes are happening at the same time.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Aug 2, 2007 20:16:03 GMT -5
I somewhat figured that. XD
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Post by tabiris on Aug 4, 2007 12:30:31 GMT -5
while youse waitings for der next instalment I's thinkings after i finish this version of der story is do a beta that is in a more book format rather than strips format. this way there would be a lot of details that are given hat are frequently left out like more descriptive descriptions of the scenes and characters, mulls dis overs and tells me if it's a goods idea or nots.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Aug 4, 2007 22:10:57 GMT -5
I think you have what just might be an idea!
Sorry, I love my msn avatar. But seriously, that would be really cool.
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Post by tabiris on Aug 5, 2007 11:29:34 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]CTVFFP 5-2[/glow]
The orange haired alp turned to the door that had burst open. Apart from a loud bang nothing came from the general vicinity of the doorway. Hey turned back to his half-awake prey. Now there were footsteps coming rapidly towards the door; the alp reluctantly turned towards the door again. Surprise, surprise, Tony and Hexavier came into the room. “Well, well, Master Tonius. It is nice to see you again. Now if you will excuse me I’m going to remove this creature from its miserable existence.”
“No youse not! Leave mein freund alones avatar.” Tony rushed at the avatar Olaf only to find himself floored.
“Sorry Tonius, you have proven yourself to be useless. Especially without youse hat.” Olaf pointed to his hat. “This here however is the genuine article.”
“Too bad it wont save you from me.” Hexavier clutched his pendant using it’s magic to hold Olaf in a single spot, completely paralyzed aside from his now curse spewing mouth.
The blue haired demon that fought Zeno entered the room making his way past Hexavier. “I believe you have been dismissed.”
“No! You cannot make me! I refuse!” Olaf struggled with his invisible bonds spewing curses in various foreign languages.
“Ah but I can.” The blue haired demon produced a flask of violet potion. He then cut off Olaf’s left hand and dropped it into the potion. There was a fierce hissing noise as the hand melted leaving a gemstone behind. The rest of the body collapsed into sand leaving behind the hat. The blue haired demon picked up the hat turned to Hex with a bow. “Thank you for your assistance Master Hexavier.”
“Your welcome Tabby. What are you going to do with the hat?” Hex walked over to Tony and picked him up.
“It’s Tabiris Master Hexavier. I think Miss Mye might like it. And speaking of which I must take my leave.” Tabiris left in somewhat of a hurry.
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Post by tabiris on Aug 5, 2007 11:33:29 GMT -5
Careful to not fall down a plothole.
and This particular Tabiris is an older character of mine whose story will kinda piece together for you. and you notice that olafs body callapsed to sand. it's part of the whole avatar demon package. the gems are the real demon and they just use earth to create things.
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Post by Angel--of--Music on Aug 5, 2007 11:47:12 GMT -5
I presume that that's where you got your name from, eh?
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Post by tabiris on Aug 5, 2007 14:32:19 GMT -5
could be. *shrug* that or i could have pinned up a list of names and thrown a dart and hit that name.
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