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Mar 4, 2006 0:08:33 GMT -5
Post by Violet on Mar 4, 2006 0:08:33 GMT -5
Ok look at dis... I was prowed of it when I wrote it but now I'm not so sure. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Come visit me In this wonderful, Horrible place Called my mind My mind is a box I'm trapped within
I watch you all through my broken window But no one can get close because of the glass It will cut them
The walls are flimsy, and held by strings I am afraid to touch them They might fall
Someday someone might brave the glass And help me as the walls fall Or I will be able to knock them down on my own
But till then I'll watch you all because I'm Waiting...waiting For the walls to fall >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Ok dats it...uggg
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Mar 4, 2006 3:37:04 GMT -5
Post by Amelius on Mar 4, 2006 3:37:04 GMT -5
Hey it's not bad, a little melancholy is all. Kinda what shyness is like, or that's what I connect with it as.
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Mar 6, 2006 19:47:04 GMT -5
Post by Violet on Mar 6, 2006 19:47:04 GMT -5
Well sorta but I'm not shy at all. It kinda like how I see the world differently than other people...I have yet to find a person I can tell all of my twisted little thought to without being told "what are you on!!!!!!!"I'd like a peson to relate too (off the computer..I'm not saying I can't reate to you guys but I would like to have someone I can actually see in everyday life)
Its also about how I have yet to connect with the real world....I still not quite sure it's all just some dream cuz real life just seem so lame to me.
I guess it really dose suck oh well I told yall I'm bad at poetry...*sulks*
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Mar 6, 2006 19:47:41 GMT -5
Post by Violet on Mar 6, 2006 19:47:41 GMT -5
NEVER AGAIN!!!!!
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Mar 7, 2006 0:32:40 GMT -5
Post by Wolfy on Mar 7, 2006 0:32:40 GMT -5
But...but it's beautiful. You really aren't going to post any ever again?
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Mar 8, 2006 17:17:04 GMT -5
Post by Violet on Mar 8, 2006 17:17:04 GMT -5
huh... wa...you like it?
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Mar 8, 2006 17:20:57 GMT -5
Post by Stonestrike on Mar 8, 2006 17:20:57 GMT -5
Wow... You have to write more poems. You have a real talent for em'.
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Mar 8, 2006 18:12:56 GMT -5
Post by Violet on Mar 8, 2006 18:12:56 GMT -5
woo may be I'm not bad...
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Mar 8, 2006 22:09:36 GMT -5
Post by Wolfy on Mar 8, 2006 22:09:36 GMT -5
Yes, wolfy likes! More! moremoremoremoremoremoremore!
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aermis
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I'm What We Call... A Creative Complainer
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Jun 6, 2006 0:11:55 GMT -5
Post by aermis on Jun 6, 2006 0:11:55 GMT -5
^_^ If my opinion counts at all, Aermis likes, too. I agree- it is rather melancholy. I like that. It seems to hold a deeper message than what I can comprehend. Which is good- because I usually can't comprehend most things that I like. But all the same, it's a very nice poem, and I'd like to see more from you... if that's not asking too much.
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