So I'm making a comic...

[fallenfantasy174]

You can find it here: antemortem.thecomicseries.com/comics/1/
It's only got two pages so far though.

What do people think?

[nightreflection]

Wow, it's looking good. I like the crispness.

I wouldn't worry about the characters looking a little off, it's still way beyond the level of most first pages, I mean, you even have the proportions pretty consistent, and as any artist will tell you, you will naturally get better over time as long as you keep drawing.

My only worry is, this is very detailed, be careful you don't bite off more than you can chew.

[fallenfantasy174]

Thanks.

I'm pretty sure as to where I made my mistakes so with luck it will get a little better pretty quickly.

I know what you mean. Though I did make two splash pages in a row and the market was more detailed than most places would be so with luck I shouldn't have that problem most of the time.