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Post by Dundee on Feb 13, 2006 19:59:30 GMT -5
You'll have to wait a while, the most inspiration I's got right now is what happens to Damon after the door opens, and I just LOVE holding this over youse heads while I delve deeper into the plot. And yes, I's has a very twisted mind, thanks to the play Into the Woods.
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Post by Daybreak on Feb 13, 2006 21:58:39 GMT -5
Ooooh, you are evil! What happens? Damon's a cutie *huggles* I likes him! And get Mye outta there, darnit! She deserves to be with her friends, not nasty-Zeno.
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Post by Scarecrow on Feb 13, 2006 22:59:16 GMT -5
Hmmm... Lots of Zeno-hating fanfics around... Perhaps I'll write on from his insanely twisted perspective? Supposing he is insane, anyway...
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Post by Dundee on Feb 13, 2006 23:28:19 GMT -5
Hmm... Well, dangit, I guess I should start on the next chapter before you guys get the wrong idea. Don't really worry about it, just another plot twist... Expect something later tonight or sometime tomorrow. Writage!!
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Post by Amelius on Feb 14, 2006 0:58:35 GMT -5
Cliffhanger?! oooo, the anticipation! Poor Mye and Damon, I worry what will happen next... This is sooo good ^_^
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Post by Dundee on Feb 14, 2006 19:44:00 GMT -5
I'm really sorry I started this plot twist. I'm stealing all sorts of stuff from the current story and twisting it up to make my own ends meet, and I'm ignoring all sorts of wonderful, logical laws of biology. Is that allowed? Is that even legal?
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Post by Dundee on Feb 14, 2006 19:47:52 GMT -5
Well, legal or not, I'd like to get this out of the way... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
“Mye!!” Boy and woman turned towards the open door with horrified expressions; there was noone there, but neither had shouted the queen’s name. All of a sudden, she looked as if she was being squeezed, and someone started laughing. “Get away, whatever you are!!” Damon rushed towards Mye’s rescue, but was pushed aside by the invisible entity. “Oh, my god. You’re all right. You’re HERE!” Mye struggled under the invisible person’s grip, but they held on tighter. “Who are you?” she cried out in desperation. “Whoops, mine bad,” said a low voice, and then all became clear. A man who looked remarkably similar to the queen was hugging her with all his might, looking as if he was trying not to cry. A satisfied, white man dressed in stripes stood in the corner, looking at the happy scene with a slightly sad look on his face. A jittery, blonde man chewed furiously on a toothpick, closely watched by a rather amused gray young man with very strange eyes, a top hat, and what appeared to be a tall, golden staff. “Hexavier?” Mye’s face looked doubtful for a moment, and then lit up in joy. “I waited. You can’t imagine how long.” “Right, now we’s gots ta gets outta dis joint, da man won’t be playing wid his scythe forevers.” Mye looked up at Tony with relief, and detached herself from her brother. “Of course, you’re right. Damon can lead the way, I think he knows these caves by heart.” Damon looked up at her, a slightly crooked, relieved smile, and started for the door.
“Remembers, I’s can only keep all of youse invisible if youse make a chain. Dis here midget goes first, I’s goes second, Mye third, Hex fourth, an’ I tink Kavonn can keep hisself an’ his ‘assistant’ safe by demselves.” The group dispersed from the room, and immediately they disappeared from view. Damon led the way, his feet remembering the way without him thinking about it, so he was free to think about what had happened. Apparently, Zeno used to be in their little group, and was Mye’s boyfriend, when he got a demonic weapon. Because of this, they had many rather unpleasant adventures. Then, when he finally started to mature as a demon, the demonic weapon had seemed to consume him; the soul of Zeno still there, and all of his fears and desires, but the weapon kept him sort of hidden, and acted out his desires, as it would have done itself. The new Zeno escaped the cabin, and wasn’t heard of for a very long time, until the group discovered that their personal cook was missing: Mye. Zeno had taken his old community, expanded it past what should be logical, and declared himself Lord and King over it. He had then taken Mye as his unlawfully wedded wife and placed her under some sort of spell, which would make her little more than a puppet. When the weapon was destroyed, the spell had weakened, and that’s why Damon was able to break it. But that still didn’t answer why she was acting so protective back there… “Oy, midget! Dis here’s a deads end! Focus, why don’t youse?” Damon snapped out of his trance and looked at the surroundings. They were in a tunnel that was blocked up with piles of boulders, that he definitely didn’t remember being there. “Those aren’t supposed to be there… I-I think he knows we’re here!” Damon stepped forward to touch the huge rocks to make sure they were real, and let go of Tony’s hand. “So, let me clarify: if one could transport these bothersome boulders out of our way, we could continue on our way out?” As Damon nodded, Kavonn stepped up, his dark grey locks stretching and curling. Within a matter of minutes, all the boulders were behind them in stacks and pillars, still leaving plenty of room to go back into the tunnel. Damon stared for a moment, then continued onward. This rescue party had to be one of the strangest he had ever heard of.
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Post by Wolfy on Feb 14, 2006 19:53:02 GMT -5
More! please! *is impatient, but working on being more patient*
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Post by Amelius on Feb 14, 2006 20:23:18 GMT -5
I think it's great, I do not mind how you do it at all, this is wildly entertaining to me!! It makes sense to me, and it's giving me quite the inspiration for the new pages ^_^ hehe, midget...silly Tony!
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Post by Dundee on Feb 14, 2006 21:36:05 GMT -5
*sigh of contentment* Alright, I'll probably not update for one or two days... But sooner or later tonight I'll be posting an image of Damon here to show what I was thinking of... But not right now, can't find the picture I'm looking for. All one big, happy family... I can't wait to break it up. >D
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Post by Daybreak on Feb 14, 2006 21:59:51 GMT -5
Uhm.... This is awesome. Not much to say besides... uh... I love Tony? Wait, we all knew that already >.O. God, I think I need to go t rehab or something. Er, do they have fangirl rehab?
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Post by Scarecrow on Feb 14, 2006 22:11:24 GMT -5
Yay, Tony! Heeheehee. He's definately mein favourite character. Allways has been.Wonders how Zeno'll reacts to this?
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Post by Dundee on Feb 14, 2006 22:22:04 GMT -5
Daybreak, you might want to look in Japan, they've most likely got one or two around with all those wonderful, wonderful mangas and animes... *slobbers* Tony used to be my favorite charrie, but my brother spoiled it all, so now it's Kavonn. He isn't as much fun to write for, but he's awfully kyoote.
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Post by Scarecrow on Feb 14, 2006 22:24:31 GMT -5
...How did he spoil it?
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Post by Dundee on Feb 14, 2006 22:28:21 GMT -5
He saw me... uh... drawing Tony over and over again with lots of hearts, and said something like this: "You like Tony? YOU LIKE TONY?! Have you ever thought about how he's most like me, the romantic prankster who never gets a date? Ha, ha." Alright, maybe it was a little less stupid sounding, but since then I've rather lost my taste for cute German boys in stripes...
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Post by Daybreak on Feb 15, 2006 15:00:48 GMT -5
Heh, good thing I don't have a brother, den ^^;. No one can keep the Daybreak from the German boys! Yay! *tackles Tony and Nightcrawler*
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Post by Violet on Feb 15, 2006 20:17:37 GMT -5
I loved the last update promise me that you'll write a fanfiction for me some day...please?
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Post by Dundee on Feb 15, 2006 21:07:23 GMT -5
Aw, thankies! Alright, I'll write you a fanfiction when I've actually met all your characters on the comic and I have some good plots to twist around.
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Post by Dundee on Feb 17, 2006 20:32:18 GMT -5
Sorry for double posting, but it's been a while. Right? Bwahahahahahahaa, now it's MINE turn for amnesia!! Sorry for very short segment, and for the fact that I have absolutely no idea whether there's a door to the basement through the kitchen. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Huh, nice place you got here.” Damon wandered around the cabin, admiring the vivid room colors and much worn couch. “Yeh, but man, youse shouldda seens its when dis place was fulls! Weirdos walkin’ in and out, those weres good times.” “I can imagine… vividly.” Tony smiled at the young boy. He seemed so familiar, he could almost get used to him. Familiar… Tony sat up on the ages old couch in shock. This new boy was much too familiar. But first he would have to get the facts. “Damon? Can I’s asks youse a personals question?” Damon turned around in mild surprise. This was the first time the alp had called him by his name. He nodded and sat down next to Tony. “Can youse tells me who youse parents weres?” Damon frowned. Why was everyone asking him that? “Naw, I was adopted. Pro’bly some experiment with a human and one of the scotodino. Why?” No, it wasn’t an experiment, it was an accident, and I can never forgive myself for it. Damon started. “Hey, did you say something?” Tony looked at him worriedly, and said, “Nein, just thinking about what youse saids.” Damon, wide eyed, got down from the couch. “I need some sleep… I think.” He headed down the hall into a bright blue room that had obviously been untouched for some time. “Wait minute, is this mine-God, I really need some sleep.” Slight nausea became him, and he fell onto the dark blue bed. Tony waited a bit, listening for when the breaths came slow and long, then crept into the boy’s room. “Times to do a little bits of sleepwalkings…”
“Well, Mye? What do you think? Have we been keeping this place properly, or what?” Hexavier showed Mye into the kitchen, gesturing dramatically at the moderately clean counters and reasonably tidied silverware. “I have to say, I’m impressed. Who’ve you hired while I was gone, I know for a fact that you boys can’t keep house to save whatever lives you may have.” A scratching sound came from the basement, and Hex opened the door. “Well, Claire’s been cooking for us mostly, but it’s really Remote Beast who’s helped us most.” Mye knelt down and hugged the vivid orange wolf-like beast, laughing slightly. “He’s been through a lot, hasn’t he? Oh, Hex, I can’t tell you how glad I am to be back. It was worse than the Master.” Hexavier sighed, and helped his sister back up to her feet. “Nothing could be worse than not being with my favorite sister.” The lifelong sibling stood for a while, thinking as Remote Beast crept back down to the basement where his nap had been interrupted. And then, of course, Tony ran into the kitchen, his eyes wide and pain stricken, apparently trying to look for words he just couldn’t find.
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Post by Daybreak on Feb 17, 2006 21:18:18 GMT -5
Oooooh, intruiging! Hehehehe, I bet Damon is some kind of semi-reincarnation of the old Zeno, right? Is he? Huh, huh? Can't wait to find out what Tony saw ^^
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Post by Dundee on Feb 17, 2006 21:22:26 GMT -5
Oh, I do so looooooooove cliffhangers... *smiles diabolically, and tries to keep from laughing maniacally* No worrys, I'll be working on it lots more tonight!
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Post by Scarecrow on Feb 17, 2006 21:25:38 GMT -5
No, Dundee. Go ahead, and laugh, as maniacally as you want.
Lovely writing!
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Post by Dundee on Feb 17, 2006 21:30:39 GMT -5
Nien, I can'ts, mine parents will gets mad withs me. Aheheh, writing for Tony is fuuuuuun... And here's the next segment. Not one of my better ones, I admit, but at least it's getting one of the major plot twists out of the way, and the setting for the next segment.
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“Tony!” Mye looked at the struggling alp with worry. “Good grief, what happened?” “You-Damon-“ Mye and Hexavier looked at each other, then rushed into the living room. “Where is he?” Tony pointed towards Zeno’s old room, a horrified expression contorting his face. They ran into the room, to find Damon curled up in a ball, not moving on the bed. “I’s was lookings through his dreams-mine lord, youse never coulds imagines!!” Tony had finally found his tongue, and he couldn’t get the words out fast enough. “Does youse remembers when youse was with Zeno, did youse remembers Damon others than as a servants?” Taken back, Mye froze for a moment. “Well, n-not really, I-I, I think I can remember-Oh, my god.” Hexavier jumped back as Mye sat down suddenly on the bed, wide eyed and horrified. “Mye, who is he, anyways?” Hexavier said, growing more worried by the second. “M-my son.”
“I don’t know but I’ve been told!” “I don’t know but I’ve been told!” “We’ll be at war ‘fore the corpse gets cold!” “ We’ll be at war ‘fore the corpse gets cold!” "Sooound off!" "One! Two!" LaBelle and Sadick looked on at the troops directed by the white, purple-haired man from a base that had been installed in one of the taller trees, and sat down together on a convenient bench. “Well, ya gotta admit he’s pretty good with the troops, right?” Sadick smiled encouragingly at LaBelle, who merely grunted, highly annoyed. “I think he’s doing pretty well, even for a ground based demon. He’s improved much since I last fought him, wouldn’t you agree?” K’ale came up the tree, disregarding the rope ladder completely, and sat down on the other side of the disgruntled wolf elf. “I suppose he’s alright. He could be better. Much better. But this Daray does communicate with the troops well.” LaBelle said, and sighed. “I actually hate war, do you know that? It’s pointless. Back at my clan, all we did was have the two people fight all hands, and whoever came up with least blood won the argument. War’s the same thing, only killing about half a million innocent people.” “Hey, you know what? I’m tired of talking politics. We’ve been talking about politics since this *&^%&*( war began, and I think I’m ready for a change.” Sadick stood up and started for the ladder. “I’m going to the bar. Don’t follow.” And with that, he disappeared over the canopy.
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Post by Violet on Feb 17, 2006 23:28:15 GMT -5
WOOOOO what crule world it is!!!! I'm just loveing this...*hugs Dndee*
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Post by Dundee on Feb 18, 2006 1:19:37 GMT -5
Aww, thankyou, Violet! That makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Yeah, you can stop now. No seriously, I don't like being touched. I don't know how to get a restraining order, but I can find out how. Ugh, sorry, my sense of humor isn't at its best at 11:30 at night. Yes, it is a cruel, cruel world, and I am its GODDESS! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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Post by Scarecrow on Feb 18, 2006 15:24:31 GMT -5
*Universal GASP!* We now know Damon's secret identity. Yipes!
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Post by Daybreak on Feb 18, 2006 17:28:31 GMT -5
Oooooh, her son. Poor Tony must've been traumatised -_-;. Bet he won't be happy next time he meets Zeno, either. In fact, I see a very dangerous alp/zombie brother in the future
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Post by Amelius on Feb 18, 2006 18:08:56 GMT -5
Wow, I can honestly say I did't see that one coming! Brilliant! Thanks so much again for sharing this with me, it's really cheered me up today ^_^
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Post by Dundee on Feb 19, 2006 0:55:51 GMT -5
Heh, thought it was obvious. I'm terrible at keeping secrets-at least when they don't hurt someone. Anyway, more on Damon soon enough, but next chapter's gonna be on Zerlocke! Weee! ... I think.
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Post by Arya on Feb 20, 2006 1:40:39 GMT -5
Oh man! Hey Amy, CAN zombies have babies? You showed somthing similar in UiU and now this...my curiosity is savage! 0.0
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