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Post by Seth Asathi on Jan 17, 2007 19:23:26 GMT -5
I lay in bed at night, and stare at the ceiling. I can't sleep, can't rest, can't shake this feeling. Hours pass and nothing changes, my eyes just won't shut. the wound on my soul is one deep, long cut.
Time passes too quickly for me to catch hold the world passes me by and I can't break the mold My life is just property, my existance bought and sold It won't be long now until my soul grows old.
What will be my legacy? What will be my mark? What will you remember me for, when my light finally grows dark? Will you think of me in any way lasting? Or will the thoughts, like my life, only be passing?
I wrote this not but ten minutes before finding out some extremely depressing news... it will never be a finished piece, there is nothing left to say... but... spend time with those close to you, while you have them... it ends too quickly... just too quickly.
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Post by Seth Asathi on Apr 1, 2007 11:11:50 GMT -5
let my voice flow like a shadow through a window formless shapeless unidentifiable let us watch it grow.
words of wisdom, words of light words of a dark, tormented night.
unyielding grace and limitless depth forever failing when facing death charming rogue with silver tongue a voice of angels not spoken but sung
Curse of the coward, bane of the fool to those men it is useless as a tool
but in some hands there is mastery the reason is but a mystery bringing great joy in my reality my words are my gift to thee.
Like most poetry I write, I just kind of throw it together and see what happens.
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Post by dragonblade261 on May 1, 2007 19:23:21 GMT -5
*clapclapclapetcfor184.25minutes*Awesome poems guys!
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Post by Wolfy on May 1, 2007 19:48:14 GMT -5
Oh, here's one that I wrote that I love. ^^; It's actuallygoing to be featured pretty promantly in a story I'm writing:
Welcome to my lies
Welcome to my world, Welcome to my pain. Welcome to the truth behind the mask, To the clouds that bring the rain.
Welcome to the sorrow, Welcome to the lies. Welcome, one and all, To the feelings deep inside.
An aching pain that I disguise With smiles and laughs, the truth will die. Thus the truth becomes the lie.
Welcome to my world.
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Post by Dragyn on May 2, 2007 0:04:40 GMT -5
Whoah. Nice, all of ya'll.
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Post by Wolfy on Nov 21, 2007 0:17:37 GMT -5
Should I?
Should I tell you that I miss you? Should I tell you that I need you? Should I tell you that I love you?
Should I tell you when I smile? Should I tell you when I hurt? Should I tell you when I cry?
Should I tell you what I think? Should I tell you what I feel? Should I tell you anything?
Would it matter if I didn't? Would it matter... If I did?
*cough*
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Post by ogrefairy on Nov 21, 2007 17:02:10 GMT -5
Oh wow!
Wolfy that is beautiful! You have very emotional poetry.
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Post by kioushan on Nov 21, 2007 18:23:51 GMT -5
Miss Wolfy is an epic poet! I envy her skills...
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Post by Wolfy on Nov 21, 2007 20:45:44 GMT -5
Those who have wandered through my dA will have seen these already...
The Last Thing
A deep blackness is within me, A miasma, Corroding my soul.
A deadend feeling that's spreading, A cancer, Destroying my self-control.
The shell that concealed the person, It's flaking, The strain is taking its toll.
The walls had been there for a reason, But he, He managed to make them fall.
The blackness is rising within me. A warning- The last thing I extend to you all.
Control
Flying, Falling, Control is gone.
Over, Under, I wander on.
Walking, Running, From something wrong.
Standing, Waiting, Scared and shaking, Loss of control has won.
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Post by ogrefairy on Nov 22, 2007 12:27:01 GMT -5
Wow, the first one is pretty dark.
I really like they second one. It really expresses your feelings and yet is really simple.
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Post by Wolfy on Nov 22, 2007 14:49:57 GMT -5
Thanks... ^^;; Yeah... the really funny thing is those two were written within an hour of each other.
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Post by ogrefairy on Dec 1, 2007 17:10:18 GMT -5
Wow.
You are so poetic! ^^
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